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Posted by: Eat-Sleep-andJam Jun 12 2008, 12:32 AM

[Chorus:
Were going down forever,
It appears nothing will ever get better.
So pack your bags and say your goodbyes,
Cause tommorow marks the end of our lifes.


You gave it your all.
You did real well.
Its a shame were all gonna,
Rott in Hell.

They Bless,
And Were Down Here.
Screwed.
A Mess.

Its a shame we didnt know Heaven was legit.
Now were stuck down here in this firey pit.

Chorus:
Were going down forever,
It appears nothing will ever get better.
So pack your bags and say your goodbyes,
Cause tommorow marks the end of our lifes.

You did your best.
A shot in the dark.
Graced with no pain.
Its all the same.

Innocent ( You are ? )
News to me.
We all made mistakes.
You, more than me.

Its a shame you never said your prayers,
No youll stay down there,
Forever and Ever.
No one really cares.

Chorus:
Were going down forever,
It appears nothing will ever get better.
So pack your bags and say your goodbyes,
Cause tommorow marks the end of our lifes.


We'll be here forever,
Waiting for a new chance at hope !

We'll be near forever !
Our screams that may never be silenced.
Dreams that will always be, below you.

So pack your bags and say your goodbyes,
Cause tommorow marks the end of our lifes.



_______________________© John Minoia 2008

Song about the poor souls rotting in hell, and all they ever wanted was to get into heaven. So once their dead, the must pack their bags and prepare for a departure they'll never forget.-Enjoy smile.gif

Posted by: The Uncreator Jun 12 2008, 04:16 AM

Reminds me of Dante's Inferno and God's Demon, Both books I hold in HIGH regard, nice story, and well done, just wished that the verses were a tad bit longer, But thats just me.

Posted by: TreyDeschamp Jun 12 2008, 04:24 AM

Very Very NICE!!!! it tells a great story of what could happen to anyone when they die.

Posted by: Eat-Sleep-andJam Jun 12 2008, 12:21 PM

QUOTE (The Uncreator @ Jun 11 2008, 07:16 PM) *
Reminds me of Dante's Inferno and God's Demon, Both books I hold in HIGH regard, nice story, and well done, just wished that the verses were a tad bit longer, But thats just me.

Yeah I had the same issue with it, I might make some minor edits a little later today smile.gif

QUOTE (TreyDeschamp @ Jun 11 2008, 07:24 PM) *
Very Very NICE!!!! it tells a great story of what could happen to anyone when they die.


Yeah Its probably one of the biggest mysteries out there when you think about it biggrin.gif

Posted by: Ivan Milenkovic Jun 12 2008, 02:45 PM

Very good lyrics man smile.gif

Posted by: Eat-Sleep-andJam Jun 12 2008, 09:04 PM

QUOTE (Ivan Milenkovic @ Jun 12 2008, 05:45 AM) *
Very good lyrics man smile.gif

Thanks Ivan smile.gif

Posted by: Nick325 Jun 12 2008, 09:07 PM

nice ESJ

Posted by: Hisham Al-Sanea Jun 12 2008, 09:07 PM

interesting and good lyrics

Posted by: Eat-Sleep-andJam Jun 12 2008, 09:18 PM

QUOTE (Nick325 @ Jun 12 2008, 12:07 PM) *
nice ESJ


Thanks Nick smile.gif
QUOTE (Hisham Al-Sanea @ Jun 12 2008, 12:07 PM) *
interesting and good lyrics


Thanks Hisham, Nice to hear from you smile.gif

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