[quote name='Eat-Sleep-andJam' date='Apr 14 2009, 09:09 PM' post='367947']
They dont care who you are,
or Where your from.
They just want your respect.
I have none.
I loved the three first verses but was kinda confused with the last one cause, you claim to have no respect but for who? yourself? them? Not enough for me Mouth full of blood,
Theres no reason why,
I sacrificed my time,
Only a poison remains,
A living example,
It pumps through my veins.
Hmm...I sense a bit of mix ideas or maybe my head just isn't the way it is because school started today You talk about being poisoned, I presume the poison caused the blood in your mouth, but than you say there's no reason why, so I don't understand why you have blood in your mouth, and you don't seem to explain either. What's the living example? you being poisoned? you being sacrificed? I really don't get itThe desperate help ,
That I know I need,
Cutting me daily,
Just let me bleed.
Let it all pour out,
Maybe then,
Youll know what the **** im about.
Ouch! Really bad man Hope you don't mean it, hope it's just metaphoric. It's direct enough, no need to explain it.I once sang songs,
Now I just scream.
I once had hope.
Or so it seems.
That everyday,
My hearts ripped out,
I'd correct the problem,
But I have no idea what its all about.
Satan made heaven,
Theres angels in hell,
Im so far gone,
But its to early to tell,
So break it off,
And throw it away,
Theres no use for it anymore.
I can't read this without talking about my idea. People that deserve a better life don't get it, they live in hell when they should be in heaven for the persons they are, those are angels.A black hole,
Where my hate resides.
I cant let it out,
So it stays trapped inside.
Waiting till the day,
That I'm set free.
In a place where,
My heart used to be.
The idea I get, is that you want to let your hate run free...Mouth full of blood,
Theres no reason why,
I sacrificed my time,
Now its time to die
A living example,
Of not living at all.
Where were you?
When I began to fall .
Its hard to love,
When all you have is hate.
Ruling your life in a spiteless way.l
Free me from the chambers of myself,
Ive been in these quarters for so long,
And I cant seem to get out.
A ticking time bomb,
Set me off.
Loneliness...The one room you don't wanna be in, afraid of destroying yourself...X2
A black hole,
Where my hate resides.
I cant let it out,
So it stays trapped inside.
Waiting till the day,
That I'm set free.
In a place where,
My heart used to be.
Like I said before...Sorry you feel angry atm...C&C mine if you can
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