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Finshed New Song With Full Vocals, Diamond Dog

The Uncreator View Member Profile	Feb 11 2009, 07:45 PM
Feb 11 2009, 07:45 PM	Fire Up The Blades, Moderator Posts: 8.933 Joined: 6-March 07 From: St. Petersburg, Florida	I uploaded the first 2 or 3 minutes of this earlier, Just for some help on the solo, Now I would like to know what you guys think of the full song. Lyrics: A mind intrigued by complexity A mind built for the ultimate challenge He will stop at nothing to know its secret What lies at the top of the spire Its intelligence a disturbing presence Its taste for blood unsettling A mathematical prowess matched by no being Its puzzle reserved for only the most arcane thinker Misjudgement punished, Ignorance admonished SOLO I rise to this challenge I will undermine the alien sentience My mind and body altered to a hideous state Fusion of man and machine My brain undergoes its metamorphosis My eyes see shapes where there once was none Thinking in equations and solutions I notice not what I have become A voice whispers, Into my sensors On your shoulders be this burden He has defied even the allure of sleep Resorting to a state of continued awareness Machines calculate and balance a toxic equation His body has defied even the hand of death Replace, replicate, regenerate, manipulate By all means he will conquer this spire A man unrecognizeable Beneath a veil of machines His humanity lost Somewhere amongst His desire to succeed A purpose unclear A will obscured His mind not what we knew His persona erased Beneath a veil of machines Diamond Dog SOLO A mind intrigued by complexity A mind built for the ultimate challenge He will stop at nothing to know its secret What lies at the top of the spire Its intelligence a disturbing presence Its taste for blood unsettling A mathmatical prowess matched by no being Its puzzle reserved for only the most arcane thinker Misjudgement punished, Ignorance admonished His severed limbs serve only as his mental marker Of where he left his problems unsolved I walk away in a tearful stride Leaving behind what I loved to the spire You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Attached File(s) Diamond_Dog.mp3 ( 6.16MB ) Number of downloads: 248

Rated Htr View Member Profile	Feb 11 2009, 08:17 PM
Feb 11 2009, 08:17 PM	Experienced Rock Star Posts: 2.119 Joined: 15-October 07 From: Leiria, Portugal	whenever I hear a song made by you I can easily identify it, you have made your own style noticeble, congratulations... The solo is alot better than what I saw earlier, still two descending pentatonic pattern which I don't like cause it sounds so much as kirk hammett but it's your choice, some might like it...The riffs are pure power, that's all I can say... You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Currently Practicing Rhythm: Finnish Power Metal III: Nightwish Legato: Ben's Land Of Legato Alternate Picking: Alternate Picking Workout #5 Chords: Chord Melody Technique

helo92 View Member Profile	Feb 11 2009, 08:51 PM
Feb 11 2009, 08:51 PM	GMC:er Posts: 143 Joined: 26-August 08 From: Kappeln, Germany	cool song the riffs are awesome You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- <a href="http://www.wacken.com/" target="_blank"><embed src="http://banner.wacken.com/banner/WOA_Banner2010_468x60_090904_cw.swf" quality="high" width="468" height="60"></embed></a>

sted View Member Profile	Feb 11 2009, 08:52 PM
Feb 11 2009, 08:52 PM	Learning Rock Star Posts: 1.758 Joined: 13-April 08 From: Merseyside, UK	Ow my ears! Pretty cool though buddy, love a bit of thrash!! \m/, You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

The Uncreator View Member Profile	Feb 12 2009, 04:23 PM
Feb 12 2009, 04:23 PM	Fire Up The Blades, Moderator Posts: 8.933 Joined: 6-March 07 From: St. Petersburg, Florida	QUOTE (Rated Htr @ Feb 11 2009, 11:17 AM) whenever I hear a song made by you I can easily identify it, you have made your own style noticeble, congratulations... The solo is alot better than what I saw earlier, still two descending pentatonic pattern which I don't like cause it sounds so much as kirk hammett but it's your choice, some might like it...The riffs are pure power, that's all I can say... Im not too comfortalble with them myself, I've been messing around with some either Ill probably switch those runs out with. Thanks for the comments guys. Much appreciated You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

The Uncreator View Member Profile	Feb 12 2009, 07:32 PM
Feb 12 2009, 07:32 PM	Fire Up The Blades, Moderator Posts: 8.933 Joined: 6-March 07 From: St. Petersburg, Florida	New file at the top guys, this one has vocals all done for it I even do some "clean" vocals, although its more along the line of a whisper. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

Rated Htr View Member Profile	Feb 12 2009, 07:40 PM
Feb 12 2009, 07:40 PM	Experienced Rock Star Posts: 2.119 Joined: 15-October 07 From: Leiria, Portugal	The voice sounds like a combined choire of growls and power, good job You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Currently Practicing Rhythm: Finnish Power Metal III: Nightwish Legato: Ben's Land Of Legato Alternate Picking: Alternate Picking Workout #5 Chords: Chord Melody Technique

Mrblomme View Member Profile	Feb 12 2009, 07:47 PM
Feb 12 2009, 07:47 PM	Learning Apprentice Player Posts: 884 Joined: 17-September 07 From: Adegem - Belgium	How do you sound like that? You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Homer J. Simpson: Rockstars is there anything they dont know?

Dejan Farkas View Member Profile	Feb 12 2009, 07:53 PM
Feb 12 2009, 07:53 PM	Instructor Posts: 3.035 Joined: 27-November 07 From: Sarajevo, Bosnia	Good job Only thing I would do is to play with EQ and volume on lead guitar to stand out, it sounds a bit out of focus (or try to lower the volume of rhythm guitar during solo), the same for the vocals in some parts, while rhythm guitar is great but is dominating the song. So during the listening I heard mostly the rhythm guitar. You have to decide in each step of the song what has to be in focus You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- http://www.myspace.com/dejanfarkas Check out my video lessons and instructor board!

The Uncreator View Member Profile	Feb 12 2009, 07:57 PM
Feb 12 2009, 07:57 PM	Fire Up The Blades, Moderator Posts: 8.933 Joined: 6-March 07 From: St. Petersburg, Florida	QUOTE (Mrblomme @ Feb 12 2009, 10:47 AM) How do you sound like that? Practice, Practice, Practice. I had to find ways to growl and scream without damagin my voice, Took me awhile, But im getting somewhere with it. QUOTE (Dejan Farkas @ Feb 12 2009, 10:53 AM) Good job Only thing I would do is to play with EQ and volume on lead guitar to stand out, it sounds a bit out of focus (or try to lower the volume of rhythm guitar during solo), the same for the vocals in some parts, while rhythm guitar is great but is dominating the song. So during the listening I heard mostly the rhythm guitar. You have to decide in each step of the song what has to be in focus Yeah I meant to fix before, I keep forgetting. It doesnt sound too bad on my computer speakers but every other media like my stereo or car stereo its really noticeable. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

Trond Vold View Member Profile	Feb 14 2009, 07:18 PM
Feb 14 2009, 07:18 PM	Instructor Posts: 3.497 Joined: 16-February 08 From: Norge!	Another kick-butt track! Well arranged, played and performed. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Guitars: Schecter Stiletto Classic, Jackson SLSMG, Ibanez RG-380 Japan, Gibson Les Paul Studio Amp: Marshall JMP-1 -> Rocktron Velocity 100 -> Marshall JCM-900 Lead 4x12 FX and stomps: T.C Electronics G-Sharp, Korg SDD-1200, Emma Transmorgrifier, BYOC Tribooster, GGG Green Ringer, Dinosaur Overdrive, Voodoo Lab SuperFuzz, Sovtek Bassballs, Line6 Tap Tremolo, EHX Screaming Bird. ___________________________________________________ My Lessons! My Instructor Board! My Myspace!

audiopaal View Member Profile	Feb 14 2009, 07:23 PM
Feb 14 2009, 07:23 PM	Competitions Coordinator - Up the Irons Posts: 5.462 Joined: 17-February 08 From: Stavanger, Norway	Wow, great song mate You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content!

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