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Jan 10 2010, 06:47 AM
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Hi guys!
Last week I started a new band with other guy, we are working with 5 songs.... i would appreciate your comments, ideas, suggestions...anything!!  So far, this is our progress with 2 songs, these arent complete... still working on that: http://www.goear.com/listen/83a7f17/The-only-one-hm http://www.goear.com/listen/fb1a9b1/Ballad-mh Thanks for your time 
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Jan 10 2010, 07:57 AM
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very cool can't wait to hear the completed versions!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Jan 10 2010, 03:49 PM
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Great stuff mate, the compositions are very nice! I think you should crank the singer more, to allow his voice to come out more.
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Jan 10 2010, 08:05 PM
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Thank you Shredmaster! Glad you like it!
Thanks for your advice Ivan, i think you re right!
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Jan 10 2010, 11:23 PM
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hey great stuff. Singer should be more present as said before. Great songs.
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Jan 10 2010, 11:34 PM
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Hey, good songs man
 Thanks for sharing!! |
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Jan 11 2010, 02:43 PM
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hey man, very cool songs you got there! really like the chorus on the first song!
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Jan 14 2010, 07:01 PM
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Nice metal tunes! the first riff on the first song is pretty cool!
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Jan 17 2010, 12:03 AM
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Thanks guys for the comments! We still working with the songs
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Jan 17 2010, 12:14 AM
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Great job man ... keep us updated
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Jan 17 2010, 09:35 AM
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Great! I'm not into this kind of music, but I like that there is a melodic approach to it, which I oftly miss in this genre.... I also agree with Ivan, the vocals could be louder and I also miss some bottom end, it's muddy in some way (the ballad is better though). Besides that it sounds great!! Good song-writing and with some overdubs on the choruses (the vocals) You might as well have some hit song here... Good luck with the new band!!!!
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Jan 17 2010, 10:19 AM
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great! Really like the songs...
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Jan 17 2010, 10:50 AM
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wow !! killer compositions .. very melodious
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