Finally free to write my comment,Wohooo
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Well guys, as you know and as I indicated - Your takes are the right refreshment for my ears, bravo! Also I would like to give
some criticism, just in case that if you fly too high !!! So let's start ..
HungryForHeaven-
Why just so little? You run out of ideas? I expected the second round with development and an epilogue,on this way you remained incomplete - as a good movie with the cut ending,or something like that!
Technique: excellent - picking, bending, vibrato - everything is in place, the timing also, all for 10!
Criticism: You kept only one scale- Phrygian Dominant, where's the others?!? You threw a few short phrases trough three positions- on the same trace! You tried to be technically clean (and you did!) but you forgot on the power of poetry! Think about that, always!
Keep rocking !
Nimradir -
My God, this was a fantastic playing from the technical point of view. I was afraid that you will not take a break a bit!! But you did it...for a sec .!
Techique: superb - picking,tapping,bending, vibrato,tempo..did i miss something ?! 11!
Objections : You bought us with the technique, no doubt, but with the story .. hmm.. can we negotiate!?!
Would be much more pleasant maybe that you are played that diminished arpeggios in eights-as a kind of dynamic transition,on this way we have the impression of an excellent technical demonstrations,if you know what i mean! But then again, maybe it's just my subjective opinion,never mind! Great job !
Ak Rich -
Really good playing, maybe not as technically perfect as deliberately nice !
Technique: Tapping the single string is sometimes interesting If you know to make intervals of the certain scale, and you packaged it very well! : Good timing, also a good vibrato and bending!
Objections: The wrong order! In my humble opinion, the second part of the improvisation is supposed to be in the first place, and vice versa - the tension should grow slowly, and you give us a maximum at the very beginning!What do you think about?
Great work !
Quadrium-
You tried to give us an original trip, and partly you did it!
Techniques: You need to work in some elements to force the guitar to sounds as it should! Alternative picking and vibrato-focus on it! Your hands are not yet in a sync, and exercise make wonders
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Objections: This was a big bite for you, but you managed to cope with the task in your own way, and therefore I congratulate ! Pentatonic scale is grateful for the many styles, but still attempt to expand your horizons to something a bit exotic -a combination of two or three such scales + a pentatonic = endless fun!
Keep practicing,good job
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Well, I hope that you don't get mad at me if someone is injured with a criticism, but I like to be maximally realistic,heheeh!
Once again, I am grateful to you for participating and would like to go these days to a new music adventure!!!!!
Thanks guys,
Sinisa
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This post has been edited by Sinisa Cekic: Jan 11 2012, 01:25 AM