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Band/ Instrumental Idea |
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Aug 1 2013, 02:38 AM |
So i've finally found someone who actually wants to make a project. he is a vocalist and sings in a power metal stylish vocal. We've been trying to come up with certain ideas and something different than what I usually do, which has taught me new things. Also i got a synth vst which i like and used here . As of for now i can't find a way to close the song! i'm posting a link of what i have so far and if you guys can give me some pointers etc that would help! thanks guys. https://soundcloud.com/enlo22/reaper-recording
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Aug 1 2013, 03:29 PM |
Hi mate, I agree with Cosmin about structure. It isn't clear, you should define it. Also I don't find section that has a chord progression that could work as a power metal chorus, do you have it?
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Aug 1 2013, 07:14 PM |
THanks for the replies guys, yeah as of now it's more of ideas put together! that's what i'm terrible at doing is lacing everything together. i'm stuck haha.
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Aug 3 2013, 05:55 PM |
THanks for the replies guys, yeah as of now it's more of ideas put together! that's what i'm terrible at doing is lacing everything together. i'm stuck haha. I recommend you to start analyzing the music that you listen to. Pay attention to structures, how they combine the different parts, even if it's possible write it down and compare them. This will be reflected on your compositions. -------------------- My lessons
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Aug 11 2013, 08:25 PM |
\ Howdy man - why not take some time and record what you have so far and then post it so that I can see and help you a bit further, eh? https://soundcloud.com/enlo22/instrumental-without-synths here's my new take! i finished it today! |
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Aug 12 2013, 12:09 AM |
https://soundcloud.com/enlo22/instrumental-without-synths here's my new take! i finished it today! Hi mate! Congrats on the evolution of this track. The overall sound is better, the rhythm guitar tone is more clear now. In this new version I understand the structure and the addition of that melodic section makes it much more catchy now. I miss bit some of the synths that the first version had but I think that the improvement is very big. -------------------- My lessons
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