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Posted by: Young Guitarist Dec 18 2008, 06:57 PM

Well, here it is
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UcYCnoH3j4s&feature=PlayList&p=B4872BD8D59AD721&index=0

Posted by: coffeeman Dec 18 2008, 07:39 PM

Good work!

My advice is that you should let your ears guide you , you are playing a couple of notes in the wrong places in it sounds out of tune.

Also try to bend with more tha one finger , when you bend with your middle finger you can use your first three fingers and it will sound better too.

Keep working you will nail it and remember to listen what your playing.

Posted by: Trond Vold Dec 18 2008, 07:57 PM

Your timing is good at times on the solos, and thats a very important thing
But you should listen more closely if your actually playing the right note because alot of the notes were way off key, and so was the chords. Also.. i noticed one poing in the video where you stick mostly to just 2 fingers when playing the solos. Getting good use out of more fingers will not only in time make it easier to play, but will also sound better.

But still, taking how long you have played into consideration, then it's a very good start

Posted by: Lian Gerbino Dec 18 2008, 08:21 PM

well man, nice vid. What I see is: you put your fingers in a good position, you show a cool technique. but what it sounds is other thing. maybe you play it with the afination a little out, that´s why all sounds off key.

so, dont give up... overall it´s a great take. just work on those details. good luck!

Posted by: Ivan Milenkovic Dec 18 2008, 11:37 PM

I think it sounds great man, a bit more fine tuning is needed to really nail all the notes properly, and some vibrato practicing would be cool, but other than that it is very nicely played. Good job!

Posted by: Pedja Simovic Dec 18 2008, 11:42 PM

Considering its your first video I have to support it

However it sounds like your guitar is out of tune or when you were soloing you were missing your notes by one fret.
Try to record another one lets see what happens

Posted by: Pitch_Black Dec 18 2008, 11:49 PM

I think why some of the notes are off is because this song is in Eb. In case you didn't know:) Great job bye the way:)

Posted by: Ctodd Dec 20 2008, 01:54 AM

yes, I remember looking this up a while ago and seeing that its in Eb standard

So turn your guitar down a half step and try playing it again, see if it sounds better!