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Posted by: OrganisedConfusion Feb 10 2009, 03:48 PM

I added video responses to these lessons. Please comment if you can

http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/rhythm-guitar/I-got-rhythm-guitar2-palm-muting/

http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/rhythm-guitar/I-got-rhythm-guitar11-arpeggiated-chords2/

http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/rhythm-guitar/I-got-rhythm-guitar10-arpeggiated-chords1/

http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/ls/phrygian-soloing-beginner/

http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/rhythm-guitar/beginner-strumming-and-arpeggios/

http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/solo-guitar/slow-pentatonics-lesson/

http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/solo-guitar/lydian-phrasing-beginner/

Posted by: Zsolt Galambos Feb 10 2009, 05:41 PM

Hi Organized!

Here's my remarks and a personal oppinion on your video responses:

Palm Muting:
Your timing is very good, however there are some minor tempo issues
at 0:13, 0:18. Technically you nailed it, but since it is Metal, I would advise
you to pick the notes a bit stronger.

Arpeggiated chords 2:
Same as above, at 0:05. Since you're playing chords, the picking is ok.

Arpeggiated chords 1:
You nailed this one, your hair is on your stings tho, so sometimes the first note
can't be heard:) When you finish each section, try to finish it exactly on time.

Phrygian soloing:
This one is perfect. The only thing you should work on is a bit on the vibrato,
and don't let your notes ring together starting at 0:30. I really like your bending tho,
it is full of emotions:). And again, you should pick a bit stronger, but this is only my
oppinion, technically it is perfect.

Strumming and arpeggios:
You nailed this one as well. Try to change the cord just a little bit faster, otherwise this
one's perfect.

Slow pentatonics:
This one is perfect as well. You play everithing clean, with a nice feel to it. Timing is also good.
It seemes that you are slowly gaining some self confidence here:)

Lydian phrasing:
Timing is ok. You overbended a bit at 0:17. Some tones ringing at the section starting at 0:46.
Otherwise it's ok. Where's your beard?:D:D

In my oppinion, if you practice the way you practiced these, you'll have a clear road ahed of you.
Try to incorporate the licks you learned to your own style, and then change them a little bit so
it would reflect your emotions. I would like to hear some of your own stuff when you get these done.

Cheers bro
-Zsolt

Posted by: wrk Feb 10 2009, 06:38 PM

Hey Paul ("CHALLENGE STAR!") .. .. nice collection indeed.
Agree with Zsolt's comments .. all together a great level and only some small details which you will fix easily with practicing.

Posted by: kaznie_NL Feb 10 2009, 07:48 PM

Very nice tones you have OC! I don't have much to say about the playing, I don't see any obvious mistakes

Posted by: OrganisedConfusion Feb 12 2009, 03:14 PM

QUOTE (Zsolt Galambos @ Feb 10 2009, 04:41 PM)

Hi Organized!

Here's my remarks and a personal oppinion on your video responses:

Palm Muting:
Your timing is very good, however there are some minor tempo issues
at 0:13, 0:18. Technically you nailed it, but since it is Metal, I would advise
you to pick the notes a bit stronger.

Arpeggiated chords 2:
Same as above, at 0:05. Since you're playing chords, the picking is ok.

Arpeggiated chords 1:
You nailed this one, your hair is on your stings tho, so sometimes the first note
can't be heard:) When you finish each section, try to finish it exactly on time.

Phrygian soloing:
This one is perfect. The only thing you should work on is a bit on the vibrato,
and don't let your notes ring together starting at 0:30. I really like your bending tho,
it is full of emotions:). And again, you should pick a bit stronger, but this is only my
oppinion, technically it is perfect.

Strumming and arpeggios:
You nailed this one as well. Try to change the cord just a little bit faster, otherwise this
one's perfect.

Slow pentatonics:
This one is perfect as well. You play everithing clean, with a nice feel to it. Timing is also good.
It seemes that you are slowly gaining some self confidence here:)

Lydian phrasing:
Timing is ok. You overbended a bit at 0:17. Some tones ringing at the section starting at 0:46.
Otherwise it's ok. Where's your beard?:D:D

In my oppinion, if you practice the way you practiced these, you'll have a clear road ahed of you.
Try to incorporate the licks you learned to your own style, and then change them a little bit so
it would reflect your emotions. I would like to hear some of your own stuff when you get these done.

Cheers bro
-Zsolt

QUOTE (kaznie_NL @ Feb 10 2009, 06:48 PM)

Very nice tones you have OC! I don't have much to say about the playing, I don't see any obvious mistakes

Posted by: Rated Htr Feb 12 2009, 03:23 PM

I'll check these out later when I can have sound in my pc...

Posted by: Pedja Simovic Feb 12 2009, 03:28 PM

Paul congratulations on a challenge star!
Very cool videos, glad to see you are tackling lots of lessons man

Posted by: Zsolt Galambos Feb 12 2009, 03:38 PM

QUOTE (OrganisedConfusion @ Feb 12 2009, 03:14 PM)

Thanks for the feedback Zsolt. It will help me to progress and to try and make these lessons perfect. Thanks for your time


Cheers Kaz