Luna *space Metal*, Enough already ... right = P ... |
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Dec 12 2013, 01:48 AM |
Hi mate. This is a very interesting track. I find the first section, until 01:14 very fresh based on the songs that you usually compose. That parts needs more precision in timing to be more effective. Then the song becomes more melodic, I like the atmosphere, but I would go for even catchier melodies there. Just my opinion. It's a nice tune. Part 3 (starting at 02:14) is also cool, I think that the palm muted rhythm add something new and outstanding to the track.
So well done, keep on composing nice music. -------------------- My lessons
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Dec 12 2013, 05:50 PM
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Thanks , I also needed to adjust the volume of the drums on this track because listening to this tune in the car I found the drums were really soft lol should be fixed now
http://markway16.bandcamp.com/album/6-a-m-ep |
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Dec 12 2013, 07:44 PM |
Thanks , I also needed to adjust the volume of the drums on this track because listening to this tune in the car I found the drums were really soft lol should be fixed now http://markway16.bandcamp.com/album/6-a-m-ep It sounds more balanced now. I can't really note the bass in the track. Did you record one? -------------------- My lessons
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Dec 12 2013, 08:53 PM |
Gab's managed to echo my own opinions
It's got promise.. your ideas are always original, never cliche.. which is a really good thing. |
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Dec 17 2013, 03:01 PM |
That theme in the beginning got me hooked instantly! Great work mate as with all your compositions especially now that your rhythm is getting better!
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