Take 2: Winter Tune

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Take 2: Winter Tune, Lesson By Piotr Kaczor

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coffeeman View Member Profile	Oct 22 2013, 03:20 AM
Oct 22 2013, 03:20 AM	Experienced Tone Seeker Posts: 1.762 Joined: 15-September 07 From: Bogota,Colombia	Original lesson: Winter Tune by Piotr Kaczor Links to previous attempts at this lesson: http://guitarmasterclass.net/guitar_forum/index.php?showtopic=49609 You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- The only thing yo can do, is what you love! Visit my youtube

Cosmin Lupu View Member Profile	Oct 22 2013, 08:36 AM
Oct 22 2013, 08:36 AM	Instructor Posts: 22.808 Joined: 14-June 10 From: Bucharest	Hey mate This is building up quite nicely and I think you nailed the ensemble view, but let's take a look at the details: - the riff part, up to 0:32 is not dead on with the groove - there's a slight delay in your playing, almost imperceptible but it stalls the groove somehow so, please focus on playing in perfect balance with the backing track - around 01:00 there was a slide which sounded a bit hesitant - 01:25 - the bends are a bit under the pitch and the playing could be tighter in the phrase that follows I think that you can make this sound great if you fix these issues Keep rocking! Cosmin You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons We can work on YOUR GUITAR and MUSIC development TOGETHER. Write me a private message if you wish to! Please subscribe to my Youtube Channel Days Of Confusion Facebook Page Mozart Rocks My facebook page

Ben Higgins View Member Profile	Oct 22 2013, 01:45 PM
Oct 22 2013, 01:45 PM	Instructor Posts: 13.792 Joined: 11-March 10 From: England	I agree with Cosmin's observations. Also, don't forget to add the little bends that Piotr puts in the main lead lines at 0:41 and 0:52 You'll get there.. the more you do it, the better you get ! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My Lessons My Youtube Channel My Band

Darius Wave View Member Profile	Oct 22 2013, 03:33 PM
Oct 22 2013, 03:33 PM	Instructor Posts: 5.871 Joined: 29-November 12 From: Poland	Very nice! You timming is better and also the precision! Very nice bends I think that the last few seconds needs most improvements. from the first bends I'm sure Your hearing is pretty descent and further problems probably come from unstable vibrato+bending technique. You should really focus on that - when You bend and then vibrate the note, then it goes out of pitch. Try to master this technique \m/ You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Check out my lessons and my instructor profile www.facebook.com/DariusWave www.youtube.pl/vavrzyn www.niebonie.pl www.jammingcherry.pl www.facebook.com/druzyna.wawrzyna

Gabriel Leopardi View Member Profile	Oct 22 2013, 04:55 PM
Oct 22 2013, 04:55 PM	Instructor Posts: 36.043 Joined: 3-March 07 From: Argentina	Hi mate! I can see you working hard and that's great! As Cosmin and Ben perfectly marked there are some things to improve on this one. Besides those pitch issues in the bending sections I can also hear some timing details to improve in the first rhythm. I think that you should ad into your diary routine some bending training. I think that I already shared with you that Satriani's video with the exercise so keep on using it. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My lessons Do you need a Guitar Plan? Join Gab's Army Check my band:Cirse Check my soundcloud:Soundcloud Please subscribe to my:Youtube Channel

Piotr Kaczor View Member Profile	Oct 22 2013, 08:43 PM
Oct 22 2013, 08:43 PM	Instructor Posts: 1.892 Joined: 10-October 08 From: Lubaczów, Poland	Oh, these guys said everything I can't remember the last time I saw you playing - maybe 3 years. I have to admit that your progress is great! Just focus on vibrato and bends - it's eveyrthing you need. Cheers! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Check out my Instructor profile

Fran View Member Profile	Oct 24 2013, 10:29 AM
Oct 24 2013, 10:29 AM	Learning Rock Star - Wiki Coordinator Posts: 8.451 Joined: 20-November 07 From: Spain	Wow this one was so close... 7.4 Keep at it you will pass on the next try we are sure You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Guitars: Fender American Deluxe Stratocaster, Ibanez RG2570MZ, Epiphone SG G-400 Amp: Vox AC4TVH head + V112TV cab Effects: Vox Satchurator, Vox Time Machine, Dunlop CryBaby, Boss MT-2, Boss CE-5, Boss TU-2, Boss ME-70 Recording: Line-6 POD X3 + FBV-Express, Pandora PX5D GMC wants YOU to take part in our Guitar-Wikipedia! Have a good time reading great articles and writing your own with us in our GUITAR WIKI! Share your playing and get Pro-advice from our Instructors: Join REC