Composed A Solo For My Band |
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Composed A Solo For My Band |
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Sep 3 2011, 05:13 PM |
Here is a solo i composed for my bands first song tell me what you think. and sorry for the coughing in the video i got a major cold -------------------- My Gear
Ibanez RG Jackson js30 warrior jackson rr24 Line 6 Spider III amp Line 6 pod xt live Washburn acoustic Youtube Account My bands Myspace |
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Sep 3 2011, 05:17 PM |
Hey man, I think it was really cool!! I like it! I hope you feel better soon. I know how that cough is.
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Sep 3 2011, 05:32 PM
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I like it
and the cough plays |
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Sep 3 2011, 06:36 PM |
Sounded good bro, you have grown a great deal over the last few years as a player. congrats!
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Sep 3 2011, 07:58 PM |
Hope you feel better soon Isac. That's a great solo man. Try to make it a bit more simpler in some parts tho, insert a cool long bend in the first part too. All of it is awesome, and I think those are just the elements that you need.
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Sep 3 2011, 09:46 PM |
Nice clean take , like it ,congratz !
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Sep 4 2011, 09:59 PM |
I like it!! I love the mid tempo of the arpeggios, sounds very clear.
I think you should create a variation on this version, because this still sounds a bit generic, but I think once you do a twist on your first attempt it will be fresher. -------------------- Visit my:
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Sep 5 2011, 06:18 PM |
i like it man, but if you are open for suggestions, i would make a different picking for the sweep slow part, why do you need to sweep there? i would like to hear heavy picking on those arpeggios.
Also agree with ivan, you should do a break on the first part, a long note, a fx, something -------------------- Check my Instructor Profile Rockers! Got a Blog too!, www.adriantracks.com Follow me on facebook and youtube! -Youtube |
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Sep 5 2011, 07:49 PM |
and the cough plays Yeah it does.. the cough works ! I really like the solo.. I would make the end stronger though, it sounds like it just ends abruptly with no drama. |
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