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Jul 16 2013, 01:37 PM
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Hey GMC , has been a while just posting one of a few demo's I've done hope you like
"solo was mostly improvised" am in F Major or F Ionian (i think) *Never Looking Back* Take 1... Action!!!! https://soundcloud.com/vulpinetekneq/never-looking-back-take1 This post has been edited by Vulpine: Jul 16 2013, 01:47 PM |
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Jul 16 2013, 02:23 PM
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Very nice phrasing
 You focused on the melody and keep whole composition very musicial not just a show -off. Well done I suppose You do know about th e little timming problems
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Jul 16 2013, 04:20 PM
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That's a very beautiful phrasings as always mate! As Darius said, we already talk about timing, besides that it's excellent!
Thanks for sharing. -------------------- My lessons
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Jul 18 2013, 02:31 PM
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Nice!!! As Darius mentioned, you quite expertly incorporated the melody through line in to the solo. IMHO this is the mark of a really good solo player. Well done. A solo happens in the context of the music around it so paying some heed to the melodic structure is crucial in order to make the solo sound like an extension of the music, instead of an overlay.
As for the timing, I thought you were letting slide a bit for style points but either way the whole works, keep it up! Todd QUOTE (Vulpine @ Jul 16 2013, 08:37 AM)  Hey GMC , has been a while just posting one of a few demo's I've done hope you like "solo was mostly improvised" am in F Major or F Ionian (i think) *Never Looking Back* Take 1... Action!!!! https://soundcloud.com/vulpinetekneq/never-looking-back-take1 |
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Jul 18 2013, 02:44 PM
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QUOTE (Vulpine @ Jul 16 2013, 01:49 PM) thanks for the feed Darius was going to do a backing track to this if you or anyone was the least bit interested in playing along hey gabriel thanks man your always taking the time out to give feedback. as dave mentioned I really want to focus alot on being melodic. in my is interesting to do because I think the melodic side alot can come from your mind , but one thing I lack in my playing is licks and for the rest of this year I want to study n learn licks that I could apply melodically I've also been working on my timing abit aswell I'm so sorry of always having to say the same but this is something dramatic for me. As Paal said, talking with 100% honesty, your timing is ruining your music. It's can be hard to heard but I must say it. And basing on the following question, the issue is that you don't really note it. QUOTE (Vulpine @ Jul 18 2013, 08:34 AM) appreciate the honesty, could u point out the times when my timing is off so I could try to work on it . and yea I am tryng to find a great rhythm rock/metal tone something like that Metal 90's tone mr "Darius wave" had in that lesson = ) tone was a killer The timing issue starts as soon as your guitar starts, the rhythm guitar that seems to be a loop then, is all the time after the beat, and with a backing track like that is just impossible to keep a good timing so all your melodies sound untight, sometimes more, sometimes less. Let me know if you can note it, if not we can continue discussing it, or maybe you can send me the multitrack project to let me edit the first part to show you how it should sound. -------------------- My lessons
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Jul 18 2013, 11:34 PM
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This is really nice, you've definitely paid attention to get a really nice melody! Aside from the little timing problems, I think it's a great piece!
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I hate the metronome. But I started using it for the whole of my practice time when Gabriel told me where my timing problems arise 
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Jul 19 2013, 01:10 PM
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ok
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