Written 11 of June 2007
Old style of mine, much more open to concret ideas...Now I consider myself to be more abstract, Still, here it is....
Mind Over Heart
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He gazed upon the shining moon
a knife close to his heart.
He sacrificed his future self
Got ready to depart.
He gave away what he desired
He wished for her success.
As he watched her smile fading,
an arrow passed through his chest.
His soul reached for the heaven’s door
Got lost in the way.
She said she loved another one,
While he stood still until his decay
Mind over heart the Great Ones say,
After 3 battles he learnt to obey.
Reason has reached inside his head,
He will keep on or end up dead
He knew that it was tragic to tell,
but he couldn’t settle for more.
He kept on going to preserve the night,
and the secret to ignore.
He cried white tears because he failed,
he lost his wise idea.
The past surround his empty thoughts,
he stared once again to his old fear.
Mind over heart the Great Ones say,
He realized she was far away.
Far from discovering what is real,
He tried to avenge, his heart was killed.
Mind over heart the Great Ones say.
He sat and took the feather ink,
he wrote down on the walls.
With his own blood he left written.
“The almighty one always falls.”
Mind over heart the Great Ones say,
After 3 battles he learnt to obey.
Reason has reached inside his head,
He will keep on or end up dead
Mind over heart the Great Ones say,
He realized she was far away.
Far from discovering what is real,
He tried to avenge, his heart was killed.
Mind over heart the Great Ones say,
After 3 battles he learnt to obey.
Reason has reached inside his head,
he will keep on or end up dead
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This post has been edited by Rated Htr: Dec 3 2007, 11:46 PM
I can see how you could fit a nice melodic piece to it, there are a few points that jarr with me though so I'll point them out: 
