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Oct 25 2011, 09:07 PM
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Very nice man, I can sense a nice vibe/emotion in your voice. All in all it's very good, but you need to work on the vocals a bit more, it's false here and there, and specially concentrate on faster note changes, make them more precise (instead of just doing a undefined glissando). I think your voice color is quite good, and guitar tone as well. Just need to work a bit more on these vocals. Guitar work is mostly good, specially like the theme.
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Oct 26 2011, 01:21 AM
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hey i like it man, it's not bad, i'm a singer myself or want to be one at least, and it's kind of hard to get started on the vocals, the instrument is not made from a piece of something it's actually inside you
 so it can be challenging to get started, you already did the first huge step, you actually did it, sang the song, recorded it and shared it, that's like giant. now you need to listen to yourself on the record and start working on the bad parts, you need more air, and you need to tune up your vocals, it's very hard to do this, you DO need a good ear, but that's the beauty of it, you gotta work on it. keep it up man, it's a long journey, and it's probably the most challenging instrument. --------------------  Check my Instructor Profile Rockers! Got a Blog too!, www.adriantracks.com Follow me on facebook and youtube! -Youtube   |
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Oct 26 2011, 06:42 AM
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Hi man! Thanks for sharing your song in progress! I like the colour of your voice. Your timing is good. You have to work in your intonation... there are many notes that your are singing that are out of tune. The first step to improve this is to note it. So please listen to your take and try to note what I'm talking about. You can use your guitar and play the notes (from the scale in which the song is based) and compare them with your voice.
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Oct 27 2011, 07:50 AM
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QUOTE (Mudbone @ Oct 27 2011, 03:49 AM)  I thought you did a pretty good job Thanks mate ! --------------------   |
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