New Tune By Fatb0t - "earth Bound", Parts inspired from Trond - thanks man
fatb0t
May 26 2008, 09:32 PM
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Here's a new tune I created - inspired from the string skipping ideas Trond taught me....

It's called Earth Bound

Any CRITICAL feedback would be awesome....
I don't care so much if you like it or not kinda thing.... I want suggestions and idas for improvements.

Also if anyone wants the backtrack to jam out with - I can give it to you...

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Hisham Al-Sanea
May 26 2008, 09:41 PM
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nice Earth Bond jamming fatb0t. but be careful to the tempo in the clean riff.
any way good take

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Trond Vold
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I'm really glad to hear that my lesson inspired you biggrin.gif

Overall, I think you did a good job on this. It was melodic and had a lot of ideas.
The solos do sound a bit off-time though, and a bit unprecise. But i like the notes of the solos, you just need to work on getting them more tight and precise smile.gif
Maybe cut down on amount of notes and try to first get simpler solos to sound perfect?

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