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Feedback On Vocals, I would like some feedback to improve

Antipolitik View Member Profile	May 22 2008, 07:06 PM
May 22 2008, 07:06 PM	GMC:er Posts: 243 Joined: 6-March 08 From: Gävle	Hi, I just recorded the first take on the vocals of my new song. I call it "I feel alive". I would appreciate any feedback on my vocals on this take so I can try to improve for the next take. Since this is my first try I probably will change some of the lyrics, I wrote them on the "fly" so to speak. The chorus is a bit wierd "I feel alive cuz I'm alive" but not everything is normal is this world anyway haha Don't be afraid of really pointing out to me what "sounds" bad and good because I just picked up singing! Just want to get better! On the chorus I sing with "my" normal voice and on the verse I push it a bit to get that Godsmack, Metallica kind of vibe in the voice! Thanks in advance! [attachment=7584:Antipoli...st_take_.mp3] Lyrics: Life tells a lie remember this if I die no way I will kneel for you now I'm alive yes I am better hide away from me I feel alive cuz' I'm alive I feel alive cuz' I'm alive Feels like before everytime you close the door This time I won't take you back now I stand alone yes I do better stay away from me I feel alive cuz' I'm alive I feel alive cuz' I'm alive I feel alive cuz' I'm alive I feel so alive You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! This post has been edited by Antipolitik: May 22 2008, 10:34 PM -------------------- My Blog

Canis View Member Profile	May 22 2008, 08:58 PM
May 22 2008, 08:58 PM	Learning Rock Star Posts: 3.319 Joined: 22-October 07 From: Molde, Norway	Sounds good to in my ears ^^ Your normal voice reminded me of P.O.D You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- GMC is not just a website... It's a lifestyle! https://www.youtube.com/CanisArctus ->Click here for the ultimate practicing tip!<-

Antipolitik View Member Profile	May 22 2008, 09:36 PM
May 22 2008, 09:36 PM	GMC:er Posts: 243 Joined: 6-March 08 From: Gävle	QUOTE (Canis @ May 22 2008, 09:58 PM) Sounds good to in my ears ^^ Your normal voice reminded me of P.O.D Hey... actually you're right... haven't listened to P.O.D for a long time but now when I think about it I am kind of PODish in my voice on the chorus haha Funny stuff. Well, I think I get better and better vocally... just gotta keep practicing! Thanks Canis... You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My Blog

Pitch_Black View Member Profile	May 22 2008, 11:31 PM
May 22 2008, 11:31 PM	GMC:er Posts: 185 Joined: 29-February 08 From: Montana U.S.A	I think you sang good. But I also think you need to work on you song structure, but Thats just my opinion You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Gear: Amps: Vox AD50VT Yamaha GA-10 Guitars: Gibson SG Hohner Acoustic Effects: Digitech Death Metal Pedal Dunlop Crybaby 535q Wah Pedal And a lot on my Vox Long Live Rock And Roll!

Antipolitik View Member Profile	May 23 2008, 12:17 AM
May 23 2008, 12:17 AM	GMC:er Posts: 243 Joined: 6-March 08 From: Gävle	QUOTE (Pitch_Black @ May 23 2008, 12:31 AM) I think you sang good. But I also think you need to work on you song structure, but Thats just my opinion Thanks Pitch Black (my favourite movie btw), I will try to write some better lyrics and I have to finish the song. A friend will help me out so hopefully this weekend. Thanks again. Do you have any suggestions for the structure of the song?! Jonas You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My Blog

Nemanja Filipovi... Nemanja Filipovic View Member Profile	May 23 2008, 07:39 PM
May 23 2008, 07:39 PM	Singing Instructor Posts: 3.391 Joined: 23-January 08	Hi men,I like it in general.Singing is good.I think you should practice(use in a song) your normal voice a bit more.That when you do this hard voice in choruses,it would more effective,I like the sound of your normal voice.And I think you should upgrade the lyrics in chorus a bit,ad some different line besides "coz I m a live".IMO All the best.Keep uploading. You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Check out my video lessons and instructor board! Participate im my new Crazy Blues Collaboration

Antipolitik View Member Profile	May 24 2008, 02:19 PM
May 24 2008, 02:19 PM	GMC:er Posts: 243 Joined: 6-March 08 From: Gävle	QUOTE (Nemanja Filipovic @ May 23 2008, 08:39 PM) Hi men,I like it in general.Singing is good.I think you should practice(use in a song) your normal voice a bit more.That when you do this hard voice in choruses,it would more effective,I like the sound of your normal voice.And I think you should upgrade the lyrics in chorus a bit,ad some different line besides "coz I m a live".IMO All the best.Keep uploading. Hehe yes, I already written new lyrics... I just wrote something on the fly when I was feeling the song a bit. I'll try to sing more relaxed... You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- My Blog

Luciana Segovia View Member Profile	May 27 2008, 11:59 PM
May 27 2008, 11:59 PM	Singing Instructor Posts: 497 Joined: 2-July 07 From: Argentina	well, well, well..... first of all Thanxs for share your song! I like it very much! ... I felt it very familiar because i like that style a lot, it was remind me Metallica a lot! my technical feedback: I couldn't hear you always on pitch. I'm sure that's for the technique you are using. When you sing like James Hetfield, (like if you were angry), the sound of the voice is very cool. However it is more difficult to sing on pich when you are singing in that way, because you are not using the total capability of your vocal cords. You are forcing your cords, so you cannot control them like when you sing with your clean voice. So my advice is to pay attention on that. The rest is perfect! My congrats to you!!!!! You are at GuitarMasterClass.net Don't miss today's free lick. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! Don't miss today's free blues, jazz & country licks. Plus all our lessons are packed with free content! -------------------- Check out my video lessons and instructor board!

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