New Song, Lunar Eclipse, Feedback welcome! |
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Feb 23 2016, 06:39 PM
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Man, that was really cool, Ben! You got a lot going on in your head, keep bringing it out. I do have to agree with Monica on the synth patch though. You can do better.
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Feb 23 2016, 06:48 PM
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I'm not a big fan of Rudess to be honest, more of a Kevin Moore fan, but I haven't been able to find a sound close to his. I'll try some more
 Thanks, Rich! |
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Feb 23 2016, 06:50 PM
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Yes Great !!!
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Feb 24 2016, 03:40 PM
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Great job mate! I've been following your composition works in the last year and I've always said that you are very talented. This one should be just a first big step!
I think that this is a good song and that the mix sounds balanced. I don't think you need to continue experimenting with the mix of this one, it's time to move forward to the next song. The more songs you work there better everything will get, both composing, arranging and mixing. Keep on rocking. -------------------- My lessons
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Feb 25 2016, 05:12 PM
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I couldn't resist playing with the mix again, as I had a 1 on 1 session ish earlier with a guy who knows a few things about mixing, and I was taught a few things, which I took home and tried out. I think it's the best mix so far:
https://benjamin-storm.bandcamp.com/releases What do you guys reckon? |
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Feb 26 2016, 06:41 AM
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Sounds more open and it works on more systems it seems, from laptop speakers to real monitors so hats off to that
Are you pulling a dream theatre and doubling the guitar with the bass btw? I can hear it in parts but not in others?QUOTE (Caelumamittendum @ Feb 25 2016, 11:12 AM)  I couldn't resist playing with the mix again, as I had a 1 on 1 session ish earlier with a guy who knows a few things about mixing, and I was taught a few things, which I took home and tried out. I think it's the best mix so far: https://benjamin-storm.bandcamp.com/releases What do you guys reckon? |
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Feb 26 2016, 09:55 AM
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Congratulations!!! Really musical Awesome prog!
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Feb 26 2016, 02:03 PM
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Great composition Ben!!!
The mix is getting better and better too!!! 
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Feb 26 2016, 03:13 PM
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QUOTE (Sensible Jones @ Feb 26 2016, 02:03 PM) Great composition Ben!!! The mix is getting better and better too!!! Thanks, Jones! |
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Feb 26 2016, 03:53 PM
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I like it! It's prog, but it's enjoyable to listen to. If I could make one suggestion: the synth parts sound somewhat old fashioned or cheesy compared to the guitar parts. If you could make them not quite so simple and use more modern sounds, it would make a big difference IMHO.
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Feb 26 2016, 05:44 PM
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Thanks, Rammikin!
I must admit that I quite like the synth sound I found and used, but quite a few people have mentioned it now.
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