La "mansonesca" Collaboration, Final mix & comments |
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May 21 2008, 11:51 PM
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Hi!! Here we have the final mix and the comments. This is my second collaboration and I'm very happy with the results. Thank you all for the participation and the awesome solos. I hope that all the GMC'ers like our composition! [/size] See you in the next one! Here you have some comments that I did. I hope that you find it helpful. Organized confusion: You didn't trust in your ideas this time but I think that you did a very interesting solo in the intro of the song. The first part alla Maiden in Wasted years but harmonized is brilliant and very effective for a beginning. Then I like the idea but I would like you to do more strong bends. The licks are great so it's just practice. I also like your sound. What did you use? Good job man! Avodiez: You did very nice phrases in the first verse. The beginning with an artificial harmonic sounds very good. I like the structure of your solo… I mean te way that it begins with a melody and then becomes faster. You sound is very warm and your picking technique is precise. Well done! Enucleation: Hey! The first part of your solo sounds perfect with the song. In the last part you show us that you are very good playing sweeps. It sounds awesome!! However it sounds a bit out of scale. I think that you used arpeggios that aren't in the tonality of the song. If you use E minor arpeggios it will sound very good. So just a bit of improvisation theory here and we will have a new awesome player! Superize: I really enjoyed you take man! It sounds very good and works excellent as a chorus! The notes and arpeggios used are perfect and I just can say that I find a bit of timing problems in the second par of the arpeggios. Good job! Ztevie: When I heard you first bend I said… wou! This is going to be great! It sounds very rocker! I really like te way you use the pentatonic scale. The licks you do are very of my taste. You are a bluesy and precise rock player. Good take! Tjchep: You take sound very stoner! And that is very good for me… it's rocker and dark… You playing is like mysterious in this take. I ca say that your vibrato is very good and sounds perfect with the "sustain" of your guitar. The solo has been played very good and sounds like the verse of the song so I think that you did a great job. Smells: Yeah!! Excellent guitar solo man! And that's what I wanted to hear in that part of the song. I can sing you solo after hearing it twice and that's the idea of a solo for me. Every part is perfect so I just can say keep on the great job! You have to be in a rock band now (If you aren't yet… ). Coffeeman: Hola amigo! A vos te puedo escribir en castellano…. Pero vamos a poner en ingles para que todos entiendan. You worked perfect the last part of the song. I can say that you solo sounds like the end and that means that you did what you have to. You used very cool licks. I can here some Zakk Wylde style and also some Satriani licks there. Good job! [size="3"] 
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May 22 2008, 12:00 AM
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awsome job everyone
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May 22 2008, 01:21 AM
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QUOTE (Nick325 @ May 21 2008, 08:00 PM)  awsome job everyone Thanks!  QUOTE (Smells @ May 21 2008, 08:01 PM) Wow! what an excellent collab, thanks Gabe this is really cool, great takes from everyone!!! Thank you for your comments I am in a band yes I`ve been in and out of bands for far too many years  That sounds great! I would like to hear your music.
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May 22 2008, 02:40 AM
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Cool. Great collab everyone!!
Lol mysterious  ... haha Thanks for the comments man.
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May 22 2008, 03:50 AM
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Awesome backing track , awesome solos, awesome collab!
Thanks for your words and of course for your lessons , in these collabs is where we can show what we have learned. |
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May 22 2008, 08:27 AM
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good work from every one
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May 22 2008, 08:54 AM
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Great job everybody
It sounds very cool thanks Gabe -------------------- My Gear
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May 22 2008, 07:54 PM
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wow ! cool song we got here
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May 22 2008, 07:59 PM
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QUOTE (Tjchep @ May 21 2008, 10:40 PM) Cool. Great collab everyone!! Lol mysterious ... haha Thanks for the comments man. Thank you for joining! QUOTE (coffeeman @ May 21 2008, 11:50 PM) Awesome backing track , awesome solos, awesome collab! Thanks for your words and of course for your lessons , in these collabs is where we can show what we have learned. yeah! that's the idea with the collaboration. Well done coffeeman! QUOTE (ztevie @ May 22 2008, 02:50 AM) It turned out real nice! Great effort from all!! THanks Gabriel, nice words in your comment... I'm not really a bluesy player, but it sure was bluesy choice of notes there. Sometimes improvisin leads you in certain way, but I'm happy with my take, fits ok I think... yeas, you did a great job. I love your style in this take. QUOTE (OrganisedConfusion @ May 22 2008, 04:58 AM) Thanks for the great collab Gabriel. I really need to focus on bends and get them perfect as that is definitely a falling block for me currently that needs to be ironed out. I'm glad you like my sound as I'm still experimenting with the device really. I just use the Line 6 Toneport UX2 straight into the computer and record in Sonar and play around with the settings until I'm happy lol Thanks again and the backing was really awesome Great! nice set up. Keep on practicin the bends! QUOTE (Zizi Top @ May 22 2008, 03:54 PM) wow ! cool song we got here godd job everyone thanks! -------------------- My lessons
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May 22 2008, 09:29 PM
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Great mix, playing and comments guys. Good job
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May 23 2008, 07:02 PM
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Great takes everyone , you did excellent! This was a very interesting listen!
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