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GMC Forum _ REC _ Take 2: Heavy Metal For Beginners 4

Posted by: Beat Zbinden Aug 19 2013, 04:10 PM

Original lesson: http://www.guitarmasterclass.net/rhythm-guitar/heavy-metal-for-beginners4/

I got this guitar from a friend. This guitar is comfortable to play. I hope you see this! Christmas is coming .... -)

Links to previous attempts at this lesson:
http://guitarmasterclass.net/guitar_forum/index.php?showtopic=48897

Posted by: Darius Wave Aug 20 2013, 02:38 AM

Nice, clean and precise - this is what most of this take is Congratulations! I would only improve those palm muted, fast runs after 0:30. If You hear closely it lacks a bit of note pitch information. Maybe it's a problem of right hand position but it sound a bit not right. Well done!

Posted by: Gabriel Leopardi Aug 21 2013, 05:39 AM

Hi mate! You are close to master this one. It's time to concentrate on timing, groove, and adjust the part that starts at 00:20 which doesn't sound as the original lesson. It sounds too muted.

That's all for this one, keep on the hard work!

Posted by: Fran Aug 22 2013, 11:30 AM

We need one more vote please

Posted by: Cosmin Lupu Aug 22 2013, 01:23 PM

Hey mate - I think the most obvious thing here would be the palm muting - that makes your take sound too dry, please focus on this and on the other advices that the guys have pointed out and you will make a great take out of this!

Cosmin

Posted by: Fran Aug 23 2013, 12:30 PM

Pass: 7.7