Mj Tribute Song.., Please post some harsh criticism :P
Darknodar123
Mar 13 2010, 03:34 PM
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Mar 13 2010, 03:34 PM
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Hello GMC its been some time since my last post.


Well I want to post a rec of mine here if you dont mind.


Thats because I dont possess a cam so its only audio rec.If I posted in the wrong section please move it smile.gif


Please tell me what you think about it.


Gear Used:

Epiphone Les Paul
POD Studio UX1
Reaper

Original Lesson: https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/ls/tribut...jackson_part_1/



http://www.box.net/shared/htytussv4i


Also it cant be played through box so please download it smile.gif


Cheers







EDIT:Sorry its not exactly rec smile.gif Just want some opinions and feedback smile.gif

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zen
Mar 14 2010, 03:46 AM
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Mar 14 2010, 03:46 AM
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I like it smile.gif I even heard your previous take that had timing issues. It seems you have fixed the major ones .. Well done smile.gif...
As we discussed in the chat, you got the notes down now...
now comes the time to practice it everyday to build confidence .. so you dont have to think about the notes.
By the time you buy a vid cam for REC, you'll be even better. just incorporate this piece in your daily routine and try to feel each note.
The minor timing issues at 0:53 and a few seconds after that will go away in no time..

All the best smile.gif

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Darknodar123
Mar 14 2010, 03:55 AM
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QUOTE (zen @ Mar 14 2010, 04:46 AM) *
I like it smile.gif I even heard your previous take that had timing issues. It seems you have fixed the major ones .. Well done smile.gif...
As we discussed in the chat, you got the notes down now...
now comes the time to practice it everyday to build confidence .. so you dont have to think about the notes.
By the time you buy a vid cam for REC, you'll be even better. just incorporate this piece in your daily routine and try to feel each note.
The minor timing issues at 0:53 and a few seconds after that will go away in no time..

All the best smile.gif



Thanks man smile.gif Really Appreciate it biggrin.gif


See ya in chat smile.gif

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thefireball
Mar 14 2010, 04:00 AM
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Mar 14 2010, 04:00 AM
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I thought you did quite well! Very melodic! wink.gif

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Darknodar123
Mar 14 2010, 04:06 AM
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QUOTE (thefireball @ Mar 14 2010, 05:00 AM) *
I thought you did quite well! Very melodic! wink.gif


Τhank you very much biggrin.gif

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Daniel Realpe
Mar 16 2010, 02:34 PM
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good take! melodically rich

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Darknodar123
Mar 16 2010, 03:04 PM
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QUOTE (Daniel Realpe @ Mar 16 2010, 03:34 PM) *
good take! melodically rich



Thanks man smile.gif But its not complete yet as Ive made some mistakes biggrin.gif

Extremely appreciate such words coming from instructors smile.gif

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