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Sep 22 2013, 12:59 PM
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Hey guys,
I have composed a song over the last few days. It's a metal song. It's only a draft, don't pay attention to the recording quality, mix, settings and so on... I think I begin to have my own style, and succeed in making a structured and non-too-much-repetitive song (which was one of the main points I wanted to improve). I am quite satisfied with that one, but I am looking for advice! I would really appreciate having your feedback on the composition in itself, the structure, etc... Don't hesitate to criticize, that's what I am looking for! Thank you in advance! Edit: Here is the last version : 
compo_02132_2109_5.mp3 ( 16.86MB )
Number of downloads: 231https://www.dropbox.com/s/971injabpfhdqc6/c...%202109%205.mp3 Unleech This post has been edited by Unleech: Sep 22 2013, 04:47 PM |
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Unleech Metal Composition Sep 22 2013, 12:59 PM
Ben Higgins Downloaded the file but can't play it for some... Sep 22 2013, 01:26 PM
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verciazghra I think it's a very nice metal track. The only... Sep 22 2013, 02:21 PM Unleech QUOTE (verciazghra @ Sep 22 2013, 03:21 P... Sep 22 2013, 02:25 PM verciazghra QUOTE (Unleech @ Sep 22 2013, 01:25 PM) T... Sep 22 2013, 02:44 PM Unleech QUOTE (verciazghra @ Sep 22 2013, 03:44 P... Sep 22 2013, 02:52 PM verciazghra QUOTE (Unleech @ Sep 22 2013, 01:49 PM) O... Sep 22 2013, 02:52 PM Unleech QUOTE (verciazghra @ Sep 22 2013, 03:52 P... Sep 22 2013, 02:54 PM verciazghra QUOTE (Unleech @ Sep 22 2013, 01:54 PM) T... Sep 22 2013, 02:56 PM Unleech QUOTE (verciazghra @ Sep 22 2013, 03:56 P... Sep 22 2013, 03:01 PM Unleech QUOTE (Unleech @ Sep 22 2013, 04:01 PM) T... Sep 22 2013, 03:45 PM verciazghra QUOTE (Unleech @ Sep 22 2013, 02:45 PM) W... Sep 22 2013, 04:03 PM Unleech QUOTE (verciazghra @ Sep 22 2013, 05:03 P... Sep 22 2013, 04:19 PM Unleech QUOTE (Unleech @ Sep 22 2013, 05:19 PM) Y... Sep 22 2013, 04:48 PM verciazghra QUOTE (Unleech @ Sep 22 2013, 03:48 PM) I... Sep 22 2013, 05:56 PM Unleech QUOTE (verciazghra @ Sep 22 2013, 06:56 P... Sep 22 2013, 07:05 PM
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Darius Wave I'll listen to it a few times more. The whole ... Sep 23 2013, 12:46 AM Unleech QUOTE (Darius Wave @ Sep 23 2013, 01:46 A... Sep 23 2013, 07:11 AM
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Cosmin Lupu I too like the idea of puzzle riffs - reminds me o... Sep 23 2013, 08:58 AM Unleech QUOTE (Cosmin Lupu @ Sep 23 2013, 09:58 A... Sep 23 2013, 09:13 AM Cosmin Lupu QUOTE (Unleech @ Sep 23 2013, 08:13 AM) T... Sep 24 2013, 10:14 AM
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