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> Blue Lotus(acoustic Instrumental), My first upload please give feedback
Tuubsu
post Dec 29 2007, 09:52 AM
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Hello, gmc people!

So this is a little tune which I finished just this morning, It's called Blue Lotus. It's an instrumental song for the classical guitar. It contains some nice melodies and some serious fingerpicking. I didn't really use any theory on this composition I just went with my ears.

I'm sorry that I don't have an actual recording, but this guitar pro tab is pretty good.

please give me some feedback on this...

Attached File  Blue_lotus.gp5 ( 4.67K ) Number of downloads: 116


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Vinod Saranga
post Dec 29 2007, 03:11 PM
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Well done man smile.gif
Good ear smile.gif

It's better if you can upload an actual recording.So we can give you a better feed back.
Anyway regarding the melody it's a Nice tune.


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Tuubsu
post Dec 29 2007, 03:42 PM
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Thanks Vinod! smile.gif

I really would like to record it, but I don't have any equipment for that...


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Vinod Saranga
post Dec 29 2007, 03:54 PM
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QUOTE (Tuubsu @ Dec 29 2007, 08:42 PM) *
Thanks Vinod! smile.gif

I really would like to record it, but I don't have any equipment for that...


I see smile.gif
Anyhow If you find a way to record ,upload it also.
Now you have a good tune you can develop it adding variations(eg harmonics)
Anyway the melody itself is very beatiful.
It seems to be that You have a good touch to compose music.Keep making new tunes smile.gif
Congrats!
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Ivan Milenkovic
post Dec 29 2007, 06:20 PM
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Nice stuff man, looks like a beggining of a song to me smile.gif


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post Dec 29 2007, 09:17 PM
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QUOTE (Milenkovic Ivan @ Dec 29 2007, 07:20 PM) *
Nice stuff man, looks like a beggining of a song to me smile.gif


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Well thanks, though I'm not sure what you exactly mean by that beginning thing, but coming to think about it, I have couple of more of these kind of acoustic instrumentals and I personally think they sound pretty interesting, BUT they tend to come out a little short...

And as I was practising this piece to get it in "performing shape", seeing that it was composed about 70% this morning, I came up with some nice lick-adds to it, so I think I'm gonna upgrade it a little. And I hope I can actually record the final version somehow and then upload it here.




ps. Keep the feedback coming!


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Marty Friedman (ex-Cacophony, ex-Megadeth, Solo)
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Eddie Van Halen (Van Halen....Duh!)
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