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post Jan 11 2008, 09:06 PM
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I wrote this today, relativley simple, but I could listen to this for hours.

This isn't the finished product though, this is only the ending of the piece, there are two main parts which right now I'm having trouble connecting, as soon as I think of a connecting part I'll post the entire thing!

I tried really hard to pull myself from posting this before it is finalized, but I just couldn't help myself I'm proud of this too much.

The main focus here is the backing guitar, I just put some soft lead bits in the background to emphesize the mood, this is one of those songs that I really don't care what anyone thinks about it, to me it's perfect smile.gif

I hope you enjoy it as much as me.
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post Jan 11 2008, 09:10 PM
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Sounds nice dude. smile.gif


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post Jan 11 2008, 10:57 PM
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hello Iluha, great idea, I wish to listen it finished with all the parts !!!

Ah, one thing, I listen that the rythmic guitar is a bit distorted, next time try to record it with less volume (for example down the volume control in your to 50%, I hope it would work)...

Another thing, now I have an acoustic guitar so if you want that I record this song don't doubt to coment it (but wait till february, now I'm really busy).
and maybe next month I would record a lesson with your song Galsmedley wink.gif


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post Jan 12 2008, 11:20 AM
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QUOTE (Juan M. Valero @ Jan 11 2008, 11:57 PM) *
hello Iluha, great idea, I wish to listen it finished with all the parts !!!

Ah, one thing, I listen that the rythmic guitar is a bit distorted, next time try to record it with less volume (for example down the volume control in your to 50%, I hope it would work)...

Another thing, now I have an acoustic guitar so if you want that I record this song don't doubt to coment it (but wait till february, now I'm really busy).
and maybe next month I would record a lesson with your song Galsmedley wink.gif


Thanks smile.gif yeah I agree it's too distorted, it should be playd with an acoustic, in the final version it will be acoustic no doubt!

Looking forward for that lesson!


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post Jan 12 2008, 11:59 PM
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Very mellow and melodic, excellent work! smile.gif


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post Jan 13 2008, 04:53 PM
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QUOTE (Toni Suominen @ Jan 13 2008, 12:59 AM) *
Very mellow and melodic, excellent work! smile.gif


Thanks smile.gif You need to hear it on the acoustic.. it honestly takes my breath away tongue.gif it's allready done now only need to record it!


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post Jan 13 2008, 10:03 PM
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Oh Oh, it's so good, very beautiful melody smile.gif Great job m8 smile.gif


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post Jan 13 2008, 10:04 PM
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very beautifull iluha, i already told you that on msn, the acoustic version is very nice smile.gif good work .. cant wait for the whole song ..


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post Jan 14 2008, 04:54 PM
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Thanks guys, Hope I'll have the whole thing recorded soon


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post Jan 14 2008, 07:47 PM
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Great effort man, I really like the mood of this composition. smile.gif

Off course there are few things that can be better, but I don't want to spoil a perfect thing. Keep rockin! smile.gif


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post Jan 14 2008, 09:18 PM
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QUOTE (Milenkovic Ivan @ Jan 14 2008, 08:47 PM) *
Great effort man, I really like the mood of this composition. smile.gif

Off course there are few things that can be better, but I don't want to spoil a perfect thing. Keep rockin! smile.gif


I'm guessing you'r talking about the lead, well it was only an improv of the moment tongue.gif won't be present in the final version.

Thanks for the feedback smile.gif


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post Jan 14 2008, 09:24 PM
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It sound so great and melodic ! ohmy.gif
There's only one thing I would change about it, and that's making the lead guitar a little bit less sharp ( Just my opinion tongue.gif )
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post Jan 14 2008, 09:59 PM
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QUOTE (Mark. @ Jan 14 2008, 10:24 PM) *
It sound so great and melodic ! ohmy.gif
There's only one thing I would change about it, and that's making the lead guitar a little bit less sharp ( Just my opinion tongue.gif )


Thanks Mark. smile.gif

And like I said it was just an improv, the finished product's lead fits much more biggrin.gif


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