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post Feb 10 2008, 04:20 AM
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The Daughter Of The Universe


Chapter 12: Vacant Eyes Upon Sanguine Skies
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(Growls Throughout)

Verse
Pushing further
Into an oblivion
Diving deeper
To a breathless end
Skies bleed fast
With the blood of gods

Massive shells
Verse a fragile world
Burn out her candles
Yet we fight still
Into the mouth
Of the enemy

To the mouth...
...Of Hell!

Chorus
Vacant eyes
Gaze upon
Sanguine skies
Is there no solution?
War yields no...
...Resolution!
Eternally she bleeds
Is this even...

Justified Retribution?

SOLO 1

Verse
A massive battle
100,000 ships
Scrape the emptiness
The void of space
Look high above, or down below
Destruction and its child!

Our destiny is beckoning
On the other side
Heed the call
Of a forgotten time
Push through unyielding
If we die, We die fighting!

Unholy gods...
..Sail to the firmament!

Chorus
Vacant eyes
Gaze upon
Sanguine skies
For lives unknown
We will gladly die
Getting desperate
And ever dangerous
Yes this is...

Justified Retribution!

SOLO 2
SOLO 3
HARMONY
BASS SOLO


Verse
Pushing further
Into an oblivion
Diving deeper
To a breathless end
Skies bleed fast
With the blood of gods

The battle rages
And we cross the veil
To the destitution
Absent of a galaxy
A hopeless attempt?
Yet it seems so worth it

We are coming
To Empyrean Skies!


© Brett Windnagle 2008
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Yeah, i dont write in order, i write as they come to me. This is supposed to be the scene of a battle taking place, quite a big one to (100,000 ships is a nice epic number smile.gif ). And as it seen through the eyes of the main characters of my story.

Its not done, there a few verses i need to mess around with, Im trying to keep six line verse, and my ideas arent all fitting in it sad.gif

Anyway, this is the start, i really like these lyrics, thought i would share them smile.gif

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post Feb 10 2008, 06:44 AM
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Looks great! epic...
Just one question... "Growls througout" Does it mean like... it's not kinda singed, but more like pronounced with a freakybadasshardcore kinda voice? huh.gif

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post Feb 10 2008, 07:00 AM
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TGIA6QXkRC0

at 1:09, when the growls kick in, and the clean vocals end, thats the exact voice i had in my head when i wrote this song smile.gif

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