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post Feb 13 2008, 02:21 AM
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The Daughter Of The Universe

Chapter 21: Tatyana's Story

Part 1 - Faith Destroyed
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An inescapable truth
Something I wished
Never to hear
The death of the only one
The only one that cared

Why is it always
The good that suffer and die?
Why is it always
The good that are left to cry?
Why is it always...

To never see that face
Look at me again
To never see the smiles
Grace the day again
Why is it always...

The good that suffer and die?

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For far too long
I looked to him with too much love
Maybe I was better off
To have never risked it
Never to open my heart?

I feel a hollow soul
Slowly start to give in
Devoid of any joy
Of any hope
This fight ill never win

Is there truly any point in life
If there is not even love?
Or is all meant to fade
slowly and surely
To die off with the day

BASS/ GUITAR HARMONY

And I feel the darkness of depression
Coming down on me
Deaths cold hands rubs my shoulder
Slowly my emotions bleed

If all is to end like this
Should I even fight?
Why help the one I love
To surely reach the end
Where he is certain to die?

Why is it always
The good that suffer and die?
Why is it always...

The good that are left to cry....




© Brett Windnagle 2008
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A Rather sad part in my story where someone (Tatyana) comes to a realization she doesnt want to face, but when it inevitably confronts her, she breaks down, into a depressive state, where there is nothing but sadness and suffering.
Don't worry though, the next part is called "Faith Restored" so things get better.....or do they? ph34r.gif

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post Feb 13 2008, 02:24 AM
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You never cease to amaze. smile.gif In my oppinion, these are your best lyrics yet smile.gif , and yeah, they are very sad and depressive.


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But still I want answers, what's the point, what does all this mean?
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post Feb 13 2008, 02:25 AM
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Ahh thanks many, took me awhile for me to get satisfied with them smile.gif
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post Feb 13 2008, 04:17 AM
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wow...great story....and great lyrics....smile.gif


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post Feb 13 2008, 04:25 AM
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Thanks Nemanja, means a lot from such a great lyricist as your self smile.gif
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