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 Feb 14 2008, 02:24 AM
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Lost Soul(waitng for yours).. verse: proud...and well...you have the wright to kill,and excuse to build just over our graves... it comes with hate..desire for power..abiluty to change... what evere your name....and satisfaction of others, pain and how they just obey... waching your self..make's you please.. "oh I am strong..oh I belong in hevean: you say...but there is that other side of power..when you lay down to sleep you can hear them screm...and taste in your mouth become's so sower.... chorus: the sweat and guilt...the fact you killd.. the looks behind...whispers around.. the life you had.. the deth you wait... and across you stands tousend of souls waitng for yours..... and across you stands tousend of souls waitng for yours..... -------------------- |
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Feb 14 2008, 02:27 AM
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Excellent! Would make a nice slow ballad. ide love to hear you sing some of these, by the way. great job!
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Feb 14 2008, 02:28 AM
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Cool lyrics man
 I like your singing style and lyrics. You have a great voice. I'm trying to improve my singing but I mainly only do backing anyway. -------------------- Gear Guitars:- Caparison Horus Snowcloud, Parker Nitefly M, Parker Nitefly SA, Gibson SG, Parker P10e, 40 Year Old Spanish Acoustic Amps:- Framus Ruby Riot 2x12" stack |
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Feb 14 2008, 02:39 AM
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Singing Instructor Group: GMC Instructor Posts: 3.391 Joined: 23-January 08 Member No.: 3.960 |
thanks guys...
@guitarman700 yeah...for one of my next lessons to come...before she does I will put the lyris here...and then when the lesson comes live you can hear how I "fit in" the words in melody..so the search for wright words for wigtht melody explenation(or how do I do it)...will come soon... @Organisedconfusion thanks man....I think you can improve your voice wright here on GMC..Luciana is a great instractor and you can learn much from her...and I am trying to do my best...but take every lesson seriusly and study it from A to Z...and I think you will have no problems... -------------------- |
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Feb 14 2008, 02:41 AM
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GMC:er Group: Members Posts: 5.635 Joined: 29-November 07 From: Nottingham, UK Member No.: 3.401 |
QUOTE (Nemanja @ Feb 14 2008, 01:39 AM)  thanks guys... @guitarman700 yeah...for one of my next lessons to come...before she does I will put the lyris here...and then when the lesson comes live you can hear how I "fit in" the words in melody..so the search for wright words for wigtht melody explenation(or how do I do it)...will come soon... @Organisedconfusion thanks man....I think you can improve your voice wright here on GMC..Luciana is a great instractor and you can learn much from her...and I am trying to do my best...but take every lesson seriusly and study it from A to Z...and I think you will have no problems... I've been practicing some vocal lessons here. Any chance of a Bon Scott style lesson sometime? -------------------- Gear Guitars:- Caparison Horus Snowcloud, Parker Nitefly M, Parker Nitefly SA, Gibson SG, Parker P10e, 40 Year Old Spanish Acoustic Amps:- Framus Ruby Riot 2x12" stack |
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Feb 14 2008, 02:47 AM
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Singing Instructor Group: GMC Instructor Posts: 3.391 Joined: 23-January 08 Member No.: 3.960 |
QUOTE (OrganisedConfusion @ Feb 14 2008, 02:41 AM) I've been practicing some vocal lessons here. Any chance of a Bon Scott style lesson sometime?  ..to high for me my friend.....will do some Faith No More tough...
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Feb 14 2008, 02:49 AM
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GMC:er Group: Members Posts: 5.635 Joined: 29-November 07 From: Nottingham, UK Member No.: 3.401 |
QUOTE (Nemanja @ Feb 14 2008, 01:47 AM) ..to high for me my friend.....will do some Faith No More tough...Try some Helium  Faith No More are incredible. I've met Mike Patton and he was such a cool guy in person. Would love a FNM style lesson
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Feb 14 2008, 02:50 AM
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Singing Instructor Group: GMC Instructor Posts: 3.391 Joined: 23-January 08 Member No.: 3.960 |
QUOTE (OrganisedConfusion @ Feb 14 2008, 02:49 AM) Try some Helium Faith No More are incredible. I've met Mike Patton and he was such a cool guy in person. Would love a FNM style lesson Lucky you...FNM style lesson is coming for shore... -------------------- |
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Feb 14 2008, 02:53 AM
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Singing Instructor Group: GMC Instructor Posts: 3.391 Joined: 23-January 08 Member No.: 3.960 |
QUOTE (OrganisedConfusion @ Feb 14 2008, 02:49 AM) Try some Helium I'v just seen this...
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Feb 14 2008, 03:35 AM
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 Fire Up The Blades, Moderator  Group: GMC Senior Posts: 8.933 Joined: 6-March 07 From: St. Petersburg, Florida Member No.: 1.304 |
As always, great lyrics man, well composed Nemanja
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Feb 14 2008, 04:23 AM
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Singing Instructor Group: GMC Instructor Posts: 3.391 Joined: 23-January 08 Member No.: 3.960 |
QUOTE (The Uncreator @ Feb 14 2008, 03:35 AM) As always, great lyrics man, well composed Nemanja thanks friend:) -------------------- |
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