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post Feb 14 2008, 05:01 AM
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Daughter Of The Universe

Chapter 22: Tatyana's Story

Part 2 - Faith Restored
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Clean Female Vocals
And so it is, and so it always will be
A haunting truth, Terrifying reality
Yet for some strange reason
I know it must be done
Was I ever more a fool
Than when I sought to take back the love?

A silence before the storm
That ominous calm before the war
Through the darkness
And wading through the fear
We all stand together
Finally not a thing left...

...For us to fear

SOLO 1
SOLO 2


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I wonder what its like, After all of this
A life in the heavens, Or eternal emptiness?
Though I may never know
I fear not the touch of death
Let my death be for a greater cause
Let my death be never mourned

Remember me not for how I died
Remember me for who and what I gave my life
Though my body will pass from this world
My presence still lives on in you
Your smile carries the grace of the gods
And the sight of it...

...Strips me of my fear

SOLO 3
BASS SOLO


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I wonder how dark space truly gets
How cold it really is?
Contemplate the future of all things
Of what have always could have been

To dwell on the wondrous things that were
And the wondrous things that are
A reassurance, A new strength
As to what were fighting for

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I need not know
The ultimate outcome

Clean Female Vocals
And I need not fear
The death of a loved one

Clean Male + Female Vocals
When we have something
That’s worthy enough to die for
We never fear...
The coldest stare
The inevitable end
The wretched touch of death

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Clean Male Vocals
I wonder what its like, After all of this
A life in the heavens, Or eternal emptiness?
Though I may never know
I fear not the touch of death
Let my death be for a greater cause
Let my death be never mourned....


© Brett Windnagle 2008
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The second part of her story, her we see her excepting the inevitable death of a loved one, and her last moments with them, A lot more to it, but it would take up so much space smile.gif

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Thanks to Owen for giving me a little extra inspiration on this wink.gif

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post Feb 14 2008, 05:08 AM
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As usual, amazing smile.gif This is such an incredible story, you should write a book, as Ive told you before smile.gif


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post Feb 14 2008, 05:53 AM
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what to say...that is great.. I like the male/female cross singing an the unison...that is great idea...
...have you evere find the inspiratioin in the movies...that can be very good thing...becouse image that you see help you find the wright atmospere...and you can easly take some sub story and wright good lines...
Tomorow(today:))...
I will try to wright good love(positive) lyrics...I find that it was allways hurder to wright happy love song then a sad one...so that is a task I gave to my selfe....but U can do the same...if any body else wons to join me please...so we can disscus all the lyricss together...so howbout it?smile.gif


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post Feb 14 2008, 05:58 AM
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Oh man it's just so freaking nice lyrics as always! getting pretty jeleous here! smile.gif

But I must ask How many daughter of the universe songs are there gonna be?

Edit. Nemanja I might just be interested in helping though I'm not the greatest lyricist... Do you have some song or base of song ready?

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QUOTE (Tuubsu @ Feb 14 2008, 05:58 AM) *
Edit. Nemanja I might just be interested in helping though I'm not the greatest lyricist... Do you have some song or base of song ready?

I ment...I coud start...or any body else..and we coud fill up the lyrics...every body can wright one or two verses or chorus...
so it coud be chaind up at the and...

The Uncreator sory for off topic in your great lyrics theard.....
I openig new therad.......Uncerator sory again....

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post Feb 14 2008, 04:24 PM
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QUOTE (Tuubsu @ Feb 13 2008, 08:58 PM) *
Oh man it's just so freaking nice lyrics as always! getting pretty jeleous here! smile.gif

But I must ask How many daughter of the universe songs are there gonna be?

Edit. Nemanja I might just be interested in helping though I'm not the greatest lyricist... Do you have some song or base of song ready?

There are a total of 25 songs smile.gif

QUOTE (Nemanja @ Feb 13 2008, 09:06 PM) *
The Uncreator sory for off topic in your great lyrics theard.....
I openig new therad.......Uncerator sory again....

Not a problem, good idea too smile.gif
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