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post Feb 14 2008, 06:16 AM
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So....I think this is good idea....but before we start..I think we shoud first come up with originall story...
Some thig like...the story a bout man and woman who are tying to find each other but they are miles a way...
and theyr way is fill with good fealings and emotions...so what do you think...or any other sugestions...


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post Feb 14 2008, 09:30 AM
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Great!

Something about that they "feel" each other in everything they look at?
somthing like:
when I look at my own refleksion in the water of this lake, All I se is you smiling back at me ...

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post Feb 14 2008, 11:46 AM
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QUOTE (Twibeard @ Feb 14 2008, 09:30 AM) *
Great!

Something about that they "feel" each other in everything they look at?
somthing like:
when I look at my own refleksion in the water of this lake, All I se is you smiling back at me ...

great stuff...let wait for some more suggestions and then we can strat the song smile.gif


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post Feb 14 2008, 11:57 AM
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any body elese....common guys need more suggestions for the story....we need happy love story....
positive lyrics....woud like to here frome The Uncreator...I suggest we with for him and off course evrebody else who want to join in.. smile.gif


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post Feb 14 2008, 12:18 PM
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QUOTE (Nemanja @ Feb 14 2008, 10:57 AM) *
any body elese....common guys need more suggestions for the story....we need happy love story....
positive lyrics....woud like to here frome The Uncreator...I suggest we with for him and off course evrebody else who want to join in.. smile.gif


I`ll have a go but I`m rubbish at lyrics


your a star in the night, a shadow on the wall
your nowhere in sight,
but with your heart you call



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post Feb 14 2008, 12:28 PM
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Well if they are miles apart, there should probably be seperate verse describing the feelings of each person.

Far from home
And the heart of the one i love
I would give anything
Just to be with you

But no ocean between us
Will ever stop me
If it takes me a life time
Then let it be


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post Feb 14 2008, 02:11 PM
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wow guys..this will be great...can wait for more..i will wright mine tonighit...
@The Uncreator.....yeah I agree there shoud be a male and female side of story...and then they shoud probably meet at the end and sing togeder...wow can wait for more of you guys...smile.gif..
at the end we will put all that together...


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post Feb 14 2008, 02:13 PM
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smells:

your a star in the night, a shadow on the wall
your nowhere in sight,
but with your heart you call

The Uncreator:

Far from home
And the heart of the one i love
I would give anything
Just to be with you

But no ocean between us
Will ever stop me
If it takes me a life time
Then let it be


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post Feb 14 2008, 02:16 PM
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I have a story of a man and woman in love for my new song but there is one hell of a twist at the end that nobody sees coming smile.gif


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post Feb 14 2008, 02:19 PM
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well if you can give us just a part of that song...it woud be great....I was thinking of happy ending for this one...but...if you have a good idea why not...smile.gif


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post Feb 14 2008, 02:34 PM
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QUOTE (Nemanja @ Feb 14 2008, 01:19 PM) *
well if you can give us just a part of that song...it woud be great....I was thinking of happy ending for this one...but...if you have a good idea why not...smile.gif

Unfortunately most of my songs are about psychotic behaviour and death and suffering lol. Here is some useless nonsense lol. Use if you wish biggrin.gif

The warmth that nurtures my frost bitten youth
The birds no longer sing melodies of beauty
A beacon on a lonely hill a reminder
To me I imagine, it's becoming clear
The images of you, through nature I cherish
My love of you remains implanted in my daily being
The abstracted images I draw, another sign
Only coming together when I feel you're near

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post Feb 14 2008, 02:39 PM
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QUOTE (OrganisedConfusion @ Feb 14 2008, 02:34 PM) *
Unfortunately most of my songs are about psychotic behaviour and death and suffering lol. Here is some useless nonsense lol. Use if you wish biggrin.gif

The warmth that nurtures my frost bitten youth
The birds no longer sing melodies of beauty
A beacon on a lonely hill a reminder
To me I imagine, it's becoming clear
The images of you, through nature I cherish
My love of you remains implanted in my daily being
The abstracted images I draw, another sign
Only coming together when I feel you're near

that is very good...and it will be used...or some parts of it...but can you try to wright some part on this subject...two ways man and female coming together and positive love story...by the way it is Valentine Day....smile.gif so this is very good timing for this laugh.gif


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QUOTE (Nemanja @ Feb 14 2008, 01:39 PM) *
that is very good...and it will be used...or some parts of it...but can you try to wright some part on this subject...two ways man and female coming together and positive love story...by the way it is Valentine Day....smile.gif so this is very good timing for this laugh.gif

I just wrote on the side of the guy. I will try and think of something on the side of the woman later.


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post Feb 14 2008, 02:41 PM
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twibeard:

when I look at my own refleksion in the water of this lake, All I se is you smiling back at me ...

smells:

your a star in the night, a shadow on the wall
your nowhere in sight,
but with your heart you call

The Uncreator:

Far from home
And the heart of the one i love
I would give anything
Just to be with you

But no ocean between us
Will ever stop me
If it takes me a life time
Then let it be


organisedconfusion:

The warmth that nurtures my frost bitten youth
The birds no longer sing melodies of beauty
A beacon on a lonely hill a reminder
To me I imagine, it's becoming clear
The images of you, through nature I cherish
My love of you remains implanted in my daily being
The abstracted images I draw, another sign
Only coming together when I feel you're near


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post Feb 14 2008, 08:17 PM
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male:

...and it's been so long
that I felt this way
I am coming home
and I'm coming to stay....

body and mind
coming to one
like space and time
like morning and Son

I can hear your voice
beautiful song
I am coming to stay
I am coming home....


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post Feb 14 2008, 08:19 PM
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.so this is what we have for now:)


twibeard:

when I look at my own refleksion in the water of this lake, All I se is you smiling back at me ...

smells:

your a star in the night, a shadow on the wall
your nowhere in sight,
but with your heart you call

The Uncreator:

Far from home
And the heart of the one i love
I would give anything
Just to be with you

But no ocean between us
Will ever stop me
If it takes me a life time
Then let it be


organisedconfusion:

The warmth that nurtures my frost bitten youth
The birds no longer sing melodies of beauty
A beacon on a lonely hill a reminder
To me I imagine, it's becoming clear
The images of you, through nature I cherish
My love of you remains implanted in my daily being
The abstracted images I draw, another sign
Only coming together when I feel you're near

Nemanja:

male:

...and it's been so long
that I felt this way
I am coming home
and I'm coming to stay....

body and mind
coming to one
like space and time
like morning and Son

I can hear your voice
beautiful song
I am coming to stay
I am coming home....


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Female:

I wonder how hard it really is
To know all that you long for
All that you love...
Is just too far away

I feel like this is getting closer
And i begin to cry a little more
Tears run down like heavy rain
Heavy rain along my cheeks

I feel your presence ever closer
But I'm afraid to let myself believe
I wonder what he dreams of
Does he ever think of me?

And in this moment of weakness
I allow myself to believe


Some more ideas smile.gif


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post Feb 14 2008, 11:40 PM
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And when I look into your pale blue eyes
The light reflects your graceful soul
I feel this love inside me,
Je vais manger tes enfants

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post Feb 15 2008, 07:41 AM
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twibeard:

when I look at my own refleksion in the water of this lake, All I se is you smiling back at me ...

smells:

your a star in the night, a shadow on the wall
your nowhere in sight,
but with your heart you call

The Uncreator:

Far from home
And the heart of the one i love
I would give anything
Just to be with you

But no ocean between us
Will ever stop me
If it takes me a life time
Then let it be


organisedconfusion:

The warmth that nurtures my frost bitten youth
The birds no longer sing melodies of beauty
A beacon on a lonely hill a reminder
To me I imagine, it's becoming clear
The images of you, through nature I cherish
My love of you remains implanted in my daily being
The abstracted images I draw, another sign
Only coming together when I feel you're near

Nemanja:

male:

...and it's been so long
that I felt this way
I am coming home
and I'm coming to stay....

body and mind
coming to one
like space and time
like morning and Son

I can hear your voice
beautiful song
I am coming to stay
I am coming home....


the Uncreator:

Female:

I wonder how hard it really is
To know all that you long for
All that you love...
Is just too far away

I feel like this is getting closer
And i begin to cry a little more
Tears run down like heavy rain
Heavy rain along my cheeks

I feel your presence ever closer
But I'm afraid to let myself believe
I wonder what he dreams of
Does he ever think of me?

And in this moment of weakness
I allow myself to believe

Owen:

And when I look into your pale blue eyes
The light reflects your graceful soul
I feel this love inside me,
Je vais manger tes enfants


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post Feb 15 2008, 07:43 AM
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this is great...we need more so we can complite the two verses.....
after that we could try with chorus....smile.gif


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