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post Feb 26 2008, 05:01 AM
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So here is a song im working on, looking to be part of my "Daughter Of The Universe" story, So far its just the guitars, but its still work in progress.

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Yeah i know the second solo is weird, I got stuck thinking of a some solos to use, so i just BS'ed it for that last solo (and yeah i know i botched that harmonic)

So let me you know what you think smile.gif

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post Feb 26 2008, 05:09 AM
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Do you know the part in Benighted before the solo where the whole song is kind of kicked up a notch? Right before it I mean, where the drums come in a little louder, etc.

I can hear that in this.. I mean after the silent part here perhaps just something subtle like adding a bassline or something but I can hear the need for something along those lines. I really like it though, cool stuff smile.gif


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post Feb 26 2008, 05:14 AM
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Yeah, ive already got someone who is willing to do bass for me, Little tired right now, so im gonna wait till tomorrow

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post Feb 27 2008, 04:29 AM
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Ok, i changed quite a bit to it, the solo is fixed up a bit, and i redid some guitars, let me know what you think smile.gif
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post Feb 27 2008, 04:55 AM
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Hey UC.

I like the updates! Two things, one I wish the rain sound would either persist throughout the piece or at least fade out slower. Secondly, when the first solo kicks in and when the distorted guitars kick in, it happens very suddenly. Perhaps thats what you meant, but I feel like theres something missing, some kind of buildup or something.

Just my 2c, I think it sounds really good though cool.gif


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post Feb 27 2008, 04:39 PM
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Yeah its supposed to be sudden, i like that. smile.gif


Well the rain is just an idea, the file isnt that long, so ill probably loop it in REAPER. I know what your talking about though, Thanks for the input smile.gif
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post Feb 27 2008, 07:36 PM
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I like the clean stuff very much, and to me the distortion part doesn't come too suddenly, I think it's cool smile.gif

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post Feb 27 2008, 07:37 PM
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post Mar 1 2008, 03:56 AM
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A More progressed version from another recording, It went from about 3 minutes to close to 7.

This is still the demo, and im happy with the current structure, i need to write one more solo, (3:52 is where i would like to start the solo)

And there is a sudden transition from dist. to clean around 4:30 i need to fix, so anyway, let me know what you think of it smile.gif

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Wow, this was so supposed to not be another thread, i thought i was replying, Oh well laugh.gif
Shows how alert i am when i intend to reply and i make a thread.....Hmmm....

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post Mar 1 2008, 10:39 AM
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This is great stuff smile.gif Intro is lovely, and i like that little dual solo.

And the rest rocks!

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post Mar 1 2008, 01:03 PM
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yeah great stuff The Uncreator..smile.gif


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post Mar 1 2008, 01:20 PM
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Great song man smile.gif
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post Mar 1 2008, 01:42 PM
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Cool stuff dude. smile.gif


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post Mar 1 2008, 03:10 PM
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Thanks guys smile.gif

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post Mar 1 2008, 03:50 PM
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I really like the clean part, very warm and relaxing, good job man smile.gif


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post Mar 1 2008, 03:52 PM
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Thanks many smile.gif
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post Mar 1 2008, 06:30 PM
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Very nice man. I really enjoyed that. I think that once you get a drum track and a bass line, the fast distorted section in the middle will be awesome. Like the intro with the rain and thunder and a strike of lightning at the end would be cool too!

Well Done! smile.gif

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post Mar 3 2008, 10:07 AM
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Very nice! I love it? What do you think about a collab? Some kinda gothic voice could be nice. smile.gif If you want...


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post Mar 3 2008, 10:13 AM
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Ahhh I really enjoyed that man smile.gif Awsome work wink.gif


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Very Maiden-ish in the intro chord progression. I like it.


Don't know if you want the hear the ideas that flew through my head when I listened to it. Maybe it will ruin your song idea but this is what I "heard".
I'd skip the 2:28 up to 2:55 and move straight into 2:56. Maybe let the clean part fade out and then BAM!

Btw the distorted guitar/amp sound like what's on the early Maiden albumts. Love that! laugh.gif So why not also add a solo with two guitars.. tongue.gif Or go all the way, change the key upwards for the solo, play two guitars, and make it three repeating chords wink.gif

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