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Ivan Milenkovic
post Mar 3 2008, 03:58 PM
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Great effort man. You must work on those bends more, they are inprecise. Also some vibratos would be good too. The clean part is great. and powerchords come in too suddenly, so you have to make an intro of somekind for them


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post Mar 3 2008, 04:15 PM
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QUOTE (MickeM @ Mar 3 2008, 01:26 AM) *
Very Maiden-ish in the intro chord progression. I like it.


Don't know if you want the hear the ideas that flew through my head when I listened to it. Maybe it will ruin your song idea but this is what I "heard".
I'd skip the 2:28 up to 2:55 and move straight into 2:56. Maybe let the clean part fade out and then BAM!

Btw the distorted guitar/amp sound like what's on the early Maiden albumts. Love that! laugh.gif So why not also add a solo with two guitars.. tongue.gif Or go all the way, change the key upwards for the solo, play two guitars, and make it three repeating chords wink.gif

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Will definitely try that out wink.gif


QUOTE (Milenkovic Ivan @ Mar 3 2008, 06:58 AM) *
Great effort man. You must work on those bends more, they are inprecise. Also some vibratos would be good too. The clean part is great. and powerchords come in too suddenly, so you have to make an intro of somekind for them


Yeah im aware of the bends, i was hoping nobody would notice sad.gif

But anyway, when i make a final recording, ill watch those bends for sure wink.gif

Thanks for all the input guys, ill try to improve it as much as possible
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