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post Mar 2 2008, 11:19 PM
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This is where you can upload your lyrics for each part.

also, if you have any kind of melody ideas for the lyrics, try and create a guitar pro file or some kind of recording of it.


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post Mar 2 2008, 11:29 PM
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Hey guys i had an idea, Maybe we could have this kinda of thing going.

(if this is ok with you Muntahunta)

We could each have a section (maybe 2 or 3 verses) and it could show the war through a different soldiers eyes?

And the people with the bridge and chorus could be like the "sum up" of these parts, or there stories.

maybe like this

Section 1 (3 verses)
Section 2 (3 verses)
Bridge (introduces the feel of the song, dark, ominous ect.)
Chorus ( a sum up of the first 2 sections)
Section 3 (3 verses)
Section 4 (3 verses)
Bridge (same thing)
Chorus (same thing, with section 3 and 4)

They dont have to be 3 verses, but its just an idea.

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post Mar 2 2008, 11:32 PM
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i REALLY like that idea!
maybe 2 verses each though... otherwise its going to be as long as freebird tongue.gif
ok, i'm going to update the first thread with this new idea.
have a read there for an update biggrin.gif

Thanks dude biggrin.gif


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post Mar 2 2008, 11:51 PM
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Section 2: The Uncreator

The flames grow higher, And the earth she burns
The will of the gods, Is it for them we die?
Came he for some patriotic cause
But got nothing but the pain and horror of war

The sanguine sky looks down on me
In a ruined, burned, scorched and once beautiful city
I lay here on my back, wishing to see my loved ones eyes
For what did i come here for, And for what did i die?


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post Mar 2 2008, 11:53 PM
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i wasnt expecting that!!!
thats brilliant!
im really impressed.

wrote in no time too tongue.gif
noice!


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So Far Away
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post Mar 2 2008, 11:54 PM
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Thanks man, I just got these in my head real quick, Glad you like them smile.gif
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post Mar 28 2008, 05:42 PM
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Well, I just came up with this, so I will assume my subscription will be accepted in the other topic tongue.gif

"I don't know anymore what home means
All I know is madness and cheating death

It's not about if I'm going to die in this endless war,
But when and where
And how many more I'm going to kill until my eyes go dark"


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