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post Mar 14 2008, 04:42 PM
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It sounds a bit like RHCP i think!

Well I've made a new basic I liked very much and I want to create a very nice song out of it.
It's very basic (especially the drums) but with some Ideas I can build it to something beautifull.

So if you've got a nice solo, drums or string or lyrics in your mind that fits this basic, then let me know and post it in this thread.
I will go on building this song up, and if I've got something that fits perfect into it... I'll edit the song and post it here again.

Chears, summer is coming and it makes me happy!

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post Mar 14 2008, 06:50 PM
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Very interesting progression for intro/verse..I like it , also I can hear some RHCP vibe in the strumming and some chords wink.gif

edit: maybe you could choose a different drum sample that would drive the song better..

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post Mar 14 2008, 06:58 PM
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yeah...very interestig...have one preposition if yoiu like....drum kick shuld be a little more come...some thing like:
kick:snar:kick:snar.....I mean I woluld do it like that...this is good to.....smile.gif


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post Mar 14 2008, 10:45 PM
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QUOTE (Nemanja @ Mar 14 2008, 06:58 PM) *
yeah...very interestig...have one preposition if yoiu like....drum kick shuld be a little more come...some thing like:
kick:snar:kick:snar.....I mean I woluld do it like that...this is good to.....smile.gif


Thnxz Nemanja,

I will try to make a better drum under it... I also like a little solo in it, I'm busy trying things out at the moment... but found nothing good yet. Perhaps after a change of the drum the solo will come up.


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nice track and good start. keep going


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post Mar 15 2008, 12:09 PM
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Here's one with different drums... I'm not totally happy about it yet. But that will be edited when I've got a good bass and solo build into it.


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post Mar 15 2008, 01:11 PM
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Hmm try an easier sample of the drum maybe the version where it drives on the ride cymbal with less bass drum kicks.. wink.gif


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Good job as always man smile.gif
..and I agree with Bogdan, you should change the drums a bit.
But a good song/project smile.gif
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post Mar 16 2008, 05:33 PM
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QUOTE (Bogdan @ Mar 15 2008, 01:11 PM) *
Hmm try an easier sample of the drum maybe the version where it drives on the ride cymbal with less bass drum kicks.. wink.gif


Well, I've changed it, but I'm not sure if you ment this...
I also put the guitar mp3 file up here, so you guys can experiment with it... Forgot to post it the last time...


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Nice, guitar is cool, but lack mids. Also drums are way to loud and lot of room on them. Try to get it even with guitar line.


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