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and it's a bit of a piece I came up with and wrote myself. Still working on it but I thought I'd add a C Chord to the end and get some constructive criticism. I am currently writing lyrics so I know the name of the song. It's just a simple sweet melody. 
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Mar 19 2008, 11:45 PM
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Missing something
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Mar 20 2008, 01:22 AM
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sry it's better now!
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Mar 20 2008, 11:57 AM
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Use this program to make the file into an mp3. It's way too huge.
Concerning the recording... it's too bassy. I can't really hear the guitar clearly. -------------------- I got a completely new $600 bass for $300. What a deal!
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Mar 20 2008, 05:35 PM
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Nice enough melody
It's a bit hard to hear the details though, it's a bit too bassy as SinoMan stated. Any chance to re-record?
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Mar 20 2008, 06:13 PM
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QUOTE (SinoMan @ Mar 20 2008, 11:57 AM)  Use this program to make the file into an mp3. It's way too huge. Concerning the recording... it's too bassy. I can't really hear the guitar clearly. +1 |
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Mar 20 2008, 06:52 PM
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QUOTE (Danilo Capezzuto @ Mar 20 2008, 02:13 PM) +1 +1 too! 
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Mar 21 2008, 12:31 PM
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It is very nice and subtle, I recommend making the bass littel less muddy, maybe you can put it in hi mids a little, but just a little, and guitar needs to be a little better. Too much bass, roll it off a little in EQ, and then send it for a revision.
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Mar 21 2008, 03:16 PM
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Nice chords man..I think that second guitar you recorded would sound better playing that chords on higher positions on the neck..Recording wise , muddy and too bassy..Good idea overall man..
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Heard the problems. Fixed them up to a certain extent and now It's version two. Tomorrow will be MIDI drums. And over the weekend I think my friend might do....REAL DRUMS!!!! Hahahaha 
Anyway as always Give Me Pointers And Tips
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Mar 24 2008, 03:08 PM
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Sounds nice now, maybe you could record some soloish fills over it here and there
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Mar 24 2008, 11:00 PM
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very pretty
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Mar 26 2008, 07:32 AM
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great progression man...beautiful ballad ,vocal would give it a great atmosphere...
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