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post Mar 21 2008, 05:01 AM
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Intro:The casket drops down and I missss my friend.
Tears roll offffff as the service ends.
The cars come and gooooo but I stayed there ALL day.
I never wanted my friennnnd to go out this way


Chorus: Theres a whole in my hearrrt , that will never be repaired ! Ever since youve left me Ive always been scared. The years pass byyyy but I still think of you ! Ever since youve left me I just dont know what to do.


Verse 1: The people walk bye but they cant feel my pain ! Someone please help me Im going insane.

Chorus: Theres a whole in my hearrrt, that will never be repaired! Ever since youve left me Ive been scared. The years pass by but I still think of you ! Ever since youve left me I just dont know what to do.
________________________________________________________________© John Minoia 2008


Just my attempt to write a little song smile.gif Supposed to be a sad, slow paced song. Its the first song Ive ever tryed to write. Im picturing it to be sung in like a Jack Johnson type voice but to still capture those sad feelings in the lyrics. Ill write more as I comes to me but I wasnt sure how to lable different parts of the lyrics- Suggestions, Ideas and Thoughts all Welcome biggrin.gif-John


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post Mar 21 2008, 06:25 AM
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nice lyrics John...smile.gif


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post Mar 21 2008, 06:51 AM
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QUOTE (Nemanja @ Mar 20 2008, 09:25 PM) *
nice lyrics John...smile.gif


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