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Patrik Jezierski
post Mar 23 2008, 06:49 PM
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Hey guys!
Just recently posted a video on youtube. And i would like to hear what you guys think of it. smile.gif
It,s a solo in C minor from a Death metal song ala In Flames/The Haunted that I wrote called Far from fallen.
The solo contains many influenced parts, I don't know if you'll hear it but the first riff is influenced by the last riff in Marcus Lavendells "Evening Blues" solo lesson. And there is also some dream theater influenced patterns. And there is also some patterns thats influenced by Oziel Zinho who has a lot of videos on youtube.

*EDIT* Please say your thoughts concerning the solo smile.gif there's some small timing "mistakes" in the solo in this version because I only took one take on the solo. Can make the solo more tight if you think that the "mistakes" are to big tongue.gif



here's the link:

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if you want to hear the whole song just click the link below. And play the song from the list.

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post Mar 23 2008, 07:00 PM
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I for one ain't a death metal expert in anyway, but I liked it especially the beginning of the solo, it had kinda "floating" feeling which I like a lot. smile.gif

Oh! and I've gotten banned so many times that I say maybe you should change the language your using in the second paragraph of you opening message... wink.gif


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post Mar 23 2008, 07:08 PM
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Hey man!! Congrats, that´s really great!! wink.gif


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post Mar 23 2008, 07:39 PM
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QUOTE (Tuubsu @ Mar 23 2008, 07:00 PM) *
I for one ain't a death metal expert in anyway, but I liked it especially the beginning of the solo, it had kinda "floating" feeling which I like a lot. smile.gif

Oh! and I've gotten banned so many times that I say maybe you should change the language your using in the second paragraph of you opening message... wink.gif



thanks man!
oh really? well I don't know any other way to explain it, guess I could change it into mistakes tongue.gif


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Patrik Jezierski
post Mar 23 2008, 07:40 PM
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QUOTE (Pablo Vazquez @ Mar 23 2008, 07:08 PM) *
Hey man!! Congrats, that´s really great!! wink.gif


Thanks man, really appreciates it! =)


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post Mar 23 2008, 07:50 PM
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you have a great touch and your playing sounds great Patrik - keep on doing what you're doing!
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post Mar 24 2008, 02:44 AM
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QUOTE (Nick Kellie @ Mar 23 2008, 07:50 PM) *
you have a great touch and your playing sounds great Patrik - keep on doing what you're doing!


thanks alot Kellie! that really busted up my confidence smile.gif


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post Mar 24 2008, 12:56 PM
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I liked it smile.gif You made a deathmetal solo sound tasteful. Well done!


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post Mar 24 2008, 02:54 PM
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Sound great to me wink.gif Though I'm not death metal expert wink.gif


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post Mar 24 2008, 07:42 PM
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QUOTE (Trond Vold @ Mar 24 2008, 12:56 PM) *
I liked it smile.gif You made a deathmetal solo sound tasteful. Well done!


thanks man! smile.gif


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post Mar 25 2008, 03:04 AM
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It was really good to say the least. biggrin.gif What I like about is 1.Its very clean 2. nothing is rushed 3. every looks very fluid 4. it displays your technique nicely ! smile.gif

Nice 1 tongue.gif


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post Mar 26 2008, 02:04 PM
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post Mar 26 2008, 03:45 PM
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thanks everybody! smile.gif really apreciates all your kind words smile.gif


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post Mar 26 2008, 04:14 PM
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The beginning is great(as is the whole thing) I favourited it now! smile.gif

btw. is that a scalloped fretboard or do my eyes suck?


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post Mar 26 2008, 07:11 PM
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well played man...very clean...smile.gif and that timing mistakes are very small,I didn't hear them at all...smile.gif


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post Mar 26 2008, 09:36 PM
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QUOTE (Tuubsu @ Mar 26 2008, 04:14 PM) *
The beginning is great(as is the whole thing) I favourited it now! smile.gif

btw. is that a scalloped fretboard or do my eyes suck?


Thanks man!
No your eyes seems to work biggrin.gif yeah the neck is scalloped, did it myself for about a month ago smile.gif
check out theese pictures on the link below. smile.gif www.guitarmasterclass.net/guitar_forum/index.php?showtopic=11998&pid=150176&mode=threaded&start=#entry150176


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post Mar 26 2008, 09:40 PM
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QUOTE (Nemanja @ Mar 26 2008, 07:11 PM) *
well played man...very clean...smile.gif and that timing mistakes are very small,I didn't hear them at all...smile.gif


Thanks man smile.gif ohh neat! biggrin.gif


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