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post Apr 1 2008, 02:20 PM
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Hi all,

I posted half of this song last week in the uploads section (https://www.guitarmasterclass.net/guitar_forum/index.php?showtopic=13634) and after feedback from others, I decided I would redo it and try to work on my timing and tuning. I also recorded the second half of the song so any more feedback and criticism would be appreciated.

Thanks a lot

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Juan M. Valero
post Apr 1 2008, 02:28 PM
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sounds really good !!!! excelent work my friend wink.gif Love this solo, it was one of the firsts that I learnt !! (I cannot remember how it was XD)


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post Apr 1 2008, 02:55 PM
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great job man...clean guitar sound so good....


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post Apr 3 2008, 10:55 PM
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nice heavens door...good track keep rockin


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post Apr 3 2008, 10:56 PM
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nice!! your pretty good!!!


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post Apr 4 2008, 12:33 AM
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Very nice job cheesebeard!! smile.gif Only suggestion and this is just personal preference is maybe a basic metronome click or something in the background. I lost my place in some parts and I feel like I could of grooved to the timing and rhythm more with something like that. Guitar tone is good also.

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post Apr 4 2008, 12:45 AM
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It's obviously a great improvement from the previous take! smile.gif
The transistion from clean to dirty is also alot better, so is the overall timing.

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post Apr 4 2008, 01:02 AM
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nice take

u can get the backing track online to add to it to make it sound even better

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I love the sound of clean guitar , sounds almost same as original wink.gif Great job overall man! smile.gif


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wow, real progression te be seen here! Nice job with the other sound. This sounds much less harsh very good!! Is it ok if I use this to try some vocals on?

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post Apr 5 2008, 06:45 PM
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Yeah sure but it might be a bit out of time at places tongue.gif
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k thnx, if it sounds ok, I might just upload it...muahaha!! (sorry just needed to do the muahaha thingie tongue.gif )


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