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post Apr 4 2008, 02:32 AM
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The Sixth Eclipse

(Twilight And Oblivion)
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Twilight
Impending doom, A blanket of night
The masses unprepared for what is to come
Perpetual daylight soon shall end
And the great darkness will veil our sanity

As the last Sun of six falls into eclipse
The starlight shall burn its scourge into the earth
Watch the sky slowly consume itself in flames
The earth slowly set ablaze

When all light dies, And darkness has engulfed the mind
Slowly watch the cold light of stars march us to insanity
As structure collapses, A failed archetype
We all will know the agonizing end of time

The horizon bleeds a crimson glow of doom
The sea of flames, Approach the rolling inferno
Fire as if water washes over the cities of man
The darkness begins to fall, All begins to end

The last Sun falls to the dreadful eclipse
A rush of darkness, followed by a cold dark light
The stars wrath pushes the sea of flames
The light of space leaves its wounds behind

Eyes blinded by terror and surprise
Masses fall to the knees, Mass insanity
Run from the flames before all is consumed
Engulfed by the dark, black, burning unknown

The last of man, Pushed against a facade
Left helpless to the coming inferno
All life extinguished under the first fall of night
The last thing they shall ever have to see

A View Of Burning Skies, From Twilight To Oblivion!

Oblivion
(Instrumental)




© Brett Windnagle, 2008
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Ok, so the idea here is basically there is planet kept in perpetual daylight by six suns, and its predicted that for the first time night is going to fall on the earth, When all six suns fall into an eclipse. Not accustomed to darkness, the inhabitants of this planets are driven mad without daylight, or some form of light. But thats not it, The Six Suns light also shield them from a dangerous force known only to them as "Stars". When night falls, The Six Suns no longer protect them, and the stars light sets the planets surface ablaze, a sea of flames that rolls across the planet engulfs all the cities and nations in a massive conflagration. And BAM!

The Apocalypse.

The whole idea is based off an amazing book i just read called "Nightfall" by Isaac Asimov, but anyone who has read it knows where my story is different. Still, All credit goes to Sir Asimov for this song smile.gif

Anyway, let me know your thoughts smile.gif
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post Apr 4 2008, 02:40 AM
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Man you never cease to impress me smile.gif

The horizon bleeds a crimson glow of doom
The sea of flames, Approach the rolling inferno
Fire as if water washes over the cities of man
The darkness begins to fall, All begins to end

Thats just amazing in my oppinion smile.gif


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But still I want answers, what's the point, what does all this mean?
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post Apr 4 2008, 03:08 AM
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post Apr 4 2008, 06:26 AM
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This was great smile.gif
Well written, nice concept/story as well smile.gif

And you're inspired by Isaac Asimov I see, but you shouldn't give him all credit you know..
You wrote this, be proud smile.gif

Good work Uncreator
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post Apr 4 2008, 09:02 AM
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Great stuff TheUncreator..as always..smile.gif


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post Apr 4 2008, 03:01 PM
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QUOTE (audiopaal @ Apr 3 2008, 09:26 PM) *
This was great smile.gif
Well written, nice concept/story as well smile.gif

And you're inspired by Isaac Asimov I see, but you shouldn't give him all credit you know..
You wrote this, be proud smile.gif

Good work Uncreator


I dont give him credit for the song, Just the major amounts of Inspiration he gave me smile.gif
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post Apr 4 2008, 04:08 PM
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QUOTE (The Uncreator @ Apr 4 2008, 04:01 PM) *
I dont give him credit for the song, Just the major amounts of Inspiration he gave me smile.gif


Good smile.gif

Very nice lyrics, are you gonna make a song now then?
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post Apr 4 2008, 06:55 PM
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Yeah for sure, I already have the "Oblivion" part written smile.gif

Need to come up with some riffs that follow the lyrics well now.
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post Apr 4 2008, 07:06 PM
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Nice, will you post it here when you're done? smile.gif
I'd like to hear it you know smile.gif

edit: typo.

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post Apr 4 2008, 07:34 PM
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Should be done this weekend smile.gif
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post Apr 5 2008, 01:02 AM
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QUOTE (The Uncreator @ Apr 4 2008, 08:34 PM) *
Should be done this weekend smile.gif


Nice smile.gif

I've started recording on a few songs as well.. Will post them when they're done smile.gif
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