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post Apr 17 2008, 09:25 PM
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Iniquity

The Redemption Of A Demon
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The angel and the demon
Commenced into eternal battle
Fighting against the scourge of God
Against the prince of Hell and darkness

Steel meets steel
On the battlefield of Purgatory
In this hellish blaze of magic
The Blessed meets The Damned

The Angel fights with strong resolve
He will never allow defeat
“I shall prevail for the grace of God,
You will not prevent my ascension!”

Chorus
Rising from the ashes
Redeemed as an angel
The Blessed fights for redemption
Back to Empyrean kingdom
He has given repentance
He bleeds for his actions
The fallen rises,
Rises into the embrace...

Embraces of God!!

Swords bites deep into the flesh
Black blood runs as if a river
“I will never surrender,
I will never let you return”

“This iniquity is heresy
To take this insignificant...
Disgrace of a former Angel
God I am your eternal enemy!!”

The Demon fights with burning anger
He will never allow defeat
“I Shall impede the will of God.
I will not let you succeed!!”

Chorus
Fallen from grace
Out of God’s eyes
The Demon fights for vengeance
Cast out of Heaven’s kingdom
Lucifer is damned
Hatred runs in his blood
Abandon all hope...
Abandon all hope...

Who enter here!!

IMPOSSIBLY EPIC SOLO SECTION
IMPOSSIBLY EPIC SOLO SECTION PART 2


The Foundation of Hell is shaken
The blackened sky over Dis is falling
Lucifer weakening against The Angel
Watch the Dark Prince dissolve....

To ash!! Is his armor broken
Angelic steel tears through the façade
On his knees awaiting the final blow
No such mercy from The Angel is shown

In the final moments of his glory
The light of heaven lifts his burden
The former demon, To Heaven ascend
Once again, A knight of Empyrean

Chorus
Rising from the ashes
Redeemed as an angel
The Blessed fights for redemption
Back to the heavenly kingdom
He has given repentance
He bleeds for his actions
The fallen rises,
Rises into the embrace...

Embraces of God!!


© Brett Windnagle
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Ok, So after talking to someone about a book called "God's Demon", I was inspired to write this piece here. Basically, there is a demon general, Who longs to be back in heaven, This former demon is now back to his true form as an angel. And spends his time in Hell, Not doing Lucifer's deeds, but Repenting, he spends millennia after millennia doing so, And finally God accepts him back into his kingdom. Angered, Lucifer challenges God and attempts to kill the redeemed Demon, But this former demon proves his superior, And does not kill him, No that would be to merciful, Instead he leaves him alive, to spend even more time in Exile, For eternity.

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post Apr 28 2008, 12:51 AM
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Impossibly epic solo laugh.gif laugh.gif
Agggh this story line reminds me of something I cant put my finger on! Thats gona bug me all night! laugh.gif

Steel meets steel
On the battlefield of Purgatory
In this hellish blaze of magic
The Blessed meets The Damned


I actually really like this stanza, Im a sucker for war lyrics smile.gif



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post Apr 28 2008, 12:58 AM
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Yeah, this is just a rough concept, Im thinking of branching this out into two songs, one about his repentance, then this song.
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post Apr 29 2008, 11:32 PM
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It reminds me of something from LOTR , but I do know why
blink.gif Nice lyrics though smile.gif


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post Apr 29 2008, 11:37 PM
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i see there is a challenge between you and eat-sleep-andjam
i can call this day is the lyrics day. also +1 to you uncreator


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post Apr 29 2008, 11:42 PM
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QUOTE (Hisham Al-Sanea @ Apr 29 2008, 02:37 PM) *
i see there is a challenge between you and eat-sleep-andjam
i can call this day is the lyrics day. also +1 to you uncreator



Ha ha laugh.gif There is no challenge. And if there was Id get beaten so bad. biggrin.gif I think of The Uncreator as not only inspiration, but like a lyrical Father laugh.gif


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post Apr 30 2008, 12:31 AM
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QUOTE (Eat-Sleep-andJam @ Apr 29 2008, 02:42 PM) *
Ha ha laugh.gif There is no challenge. And if there was Id get beaten so bad. biggrin.gif I think of The Uncreator as not only inspiration, but like a lyrical Father laugh.gif


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QUOTE (The Uncreator @ Apr 29 2008, 03:31 PM) *
You know how to make a man blush wub.gif

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I know , its quite strange , I HAVE MANY U83R P0W3R5 ph34r.gif


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