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post Apr 24 2008, 11:28 PM
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An old song i made 2-3 years ago.
Feedback and constructive critisism would be nice wink.gif
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Bogdan Radovic
post Apr 25 2008, 12:34 AM
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Well its a cool idea...Would love to see the progression develop more , I mean to better distinguish the chorus from verses ..Chorus seems to have too similar groove like the verse parts..Also bass can play a little more melodic parts..Cool song overall..

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post Apr 25 2008, 10:50 AM
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This sounds great man, I love teh galloping riffing - very Maideny wink.gif. THe one thing it is not good is the clipping. THe are a lot of crackles, try to turn down to master volume a bit


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post Apr 25 2008, 08:18 PM
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nice track and solo .i like it


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post Apr 25 2008, 08:28 PM
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I like it smile.gif Nice, clean and cool guitars.

But i would really like to hear this one again with better volume-levels. The sound clips alot at times.


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post Apr 26 2008, 05:19 AM
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hey i like it!nice song!


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post Apr 26 2008, 09:22 AM
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Great song man,I think that guitars are a little clipping,just low the volume a bit.
great song once again.


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post Apr 27 2008, 01:02 AM
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Thanks guys, ill try to fix the clipping noise, it might be there cus of my crap soundcard sad.gif


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QUOTE (Nice Guy @ Apr 27 2008, 02:02 AM) *
Thanks guys, ill try to fix the clipping noise, it might be there cus of my crap soundcard sad.gif

Every thing else is great,you can lower the volume down,and give a little compression to the guitars.That would make them sound more in the mix.smile.gif


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