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post Apr 28 2008, 02:03 AM
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As If Suspended In Water

A Tale Of A Dreams Innocence Torn Asunder
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~The Seductive Points Of Light~

A whole lifetime, Waiting, Just waiting for the time to come
For when all is before me, I shall behold
The beauty of everything, The beauty of old
A lust to wander the earth, To traverse the mind
I will never give this journey up, Not even after death

Floating through the river of consciousness
Above the mountains of the cities of earth
Exploring all I can see, Dissecting what lies beneath
Dreaming, in a heightened state of awareness
As if hanging there in sleep, Suspended In Water

I live, I laugh, I love, I cry, I feel all the emotion
Tearing at my heart, But from this I thrive
The human spirit, truly never can die
As if an entity of desire, Consumption of will
Engulf the dreams of man, Make them become reality

Feeling As if I’m Suspended In Water
I graze on the sights of Gaia, Feeding on the wonders
But one dark, cold, and beautiful star filled night
It so happens to be, That my eyes would see
Those grand, Seductive Points Of Light

Slowly they seduce my vulnerable human heart.....

~As You Look Into It, So It Looks Into You~

Reaching further than the boundaries of earth
No longer is her love, Enough to quell the thirst
I leave her trailing behind, Burning in the stardust
Look forward, Never back, Into the possibilities of Space
Mind racing, Carelessly into the black, The unknown

Pioneers of the final frontier, Setting the standards high
Mars becomes nothing but a speck on the horizon
Pluto nothing but a dot in the cosmos behind
Look not to what can be accomplished
But look to what you think cannot be achieved

Grasp It, And never let the impossible go!

Decade, Traversing the emptiness of space
The knowledge of what lies out there
Slowly acting upon the mind, Bringing it down
Relinquish all concern for the crew
There ambitions are dying, But this dream I tirelessly pursue

I lived, I laughed, I loved, I cried, I felt all the emotions
That once pushed me, That once burned inside
No longer do I feel those in me, Gone forever
I peer into the blackness to know the ultimate truth
But the price of the onset of insanity

As You Look Into It, So It Looks Into You!

~Behold The Absence Of Time~

On the brink of extinction, Standing at the edge of space
The madness of infinity bears it burden against me
Cannot comprehend, Never ending nothingness
The blackness of the void, Staring inside
Sucks me in deeper and deeper

Stare into the heart of a sun, Let the light burn my eyes
Absorb the knowledge of the universe lose all touch with reality
All systems set to collide with the fabric
Collide with the fabric of time
Black hole destiny take me in, Shred me, Tear me, To pieces

For every man that gazes and looks upon the vast emptiness
Empires of the absent galaxies, Nebulae destroy the senses

Cold and pale
The apocalyptic horses ride the blackness
Vast and empty
The holocaust of thought drops down on me
Eternal absence
Nothing stands at the edge of the black
Falling down
My mind bears the wounds of knowledge

Sanity, No doubt has left this mind, Self destruct, Collapse from within
Behold the end of all, Behold the absence of time
No religion can purify me, Console me in my controlled insanity
There is no afterlife waiting, There is nothing but the black

Oh God, If you are out there, Among the endless stars
Please help this ruined mind, Erase the fire burning my mentality
My body ache and my minds in pain, Legs no longer carry me anyway
Frail shell of a human, Gives into a paroxysm of pain
The innocence of my dream, Has been taken, Swept away!



© Brett Windnagle
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Ok, so this bulky beast is about a man, Who in the future is amazed with the wonders of the earth, His passion and his love is exploring its every part, Complete innocence. One day, He stairs out into the night sky, and is enthralled by the stars, and eventually becomes the captain of the first manned mission to explore the deepest reaches of space, His dream now becomes obsession, and the further they progress, ten years spent exploring, the crew of his ship is ready to return home, But he leaves them behind, still obsessed with his "dream". Not to long after this, he reaches the end of space, and stares into nothingness, absolute emptiness, and his mind simply collapses, and he ultimately dies.

His once innocent dream slowly is corrupted by obsession.
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post Apr 28 2008, 02:08 AM
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Well .. I dont think anyone here is going to top you in length and quality laugh.gif laugh.gif
As usual, great story smile.gif I can tell you yourself are very intrigued by space biggrin.gif
Do you have any music in mind for this song? smile.gif


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post Apr 28 2008, 02:10 AM
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Yes, space really intrigues me, Very much so smile.gif

I didnt mean it to be so long, i just kept writing! laugh.gif
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post Apr 28 2008, 02:10 AM
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QUOTE (The Uncreator @ Apr 28 2008, 01:10 AM) *
Yes, space really intrigues me, Very much so smile.gif

I didnt mean it to be so long, i just kept writing! laugh.gif



EPPPIIICCCC SOOONNNGGGG

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post Apr 28 2008, 02:16 AM
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Indeed! smile.gif
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post Apr 28 2008, 11:31 PM
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good lyrics man but i think its so long


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post Apr 29 2008, 12:27 PM
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QUOTE (Hisham Al-Sanea @ Apr 28 2008, 02:31 PM) *
good lyrics man but i think its so long



It be hard to try to describe space shorty.

Well done Brett biggrin.gif


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Christ lol. You may have to do your book in more than 1 volume biggrin.gif Cool story as always. Space is indeed a great topic of interest.


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