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Eat-Sleep-andJam
post Apr 29 2008, 12:04 AM
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Theres a person that cries, late into the night.
An untold secret is left strangled by my bedroom walls.
This feeling, this SACRED FEELING wont go away.
Can anyone relate to this tension that is free.
Can anyone relate to the otherside of me.

A teenager in a home that smells of lies.
My bestfriends feel as if im -simply- fine.
My lips scream "Addiction" , but I ignore what they say.
Can anyone relate to the otherside of me?

I conceal myface in a cloud of smoke.
The parents sleep up stairs ignoring how we choke.
My lungs rott, from this crippling candy.
Can anyone relate to the otherside of me?

We work a doubleshift of bullshit, not knowing what for.
Only to wake up clueless, on a bathroom floor.
That stench grows stronger day after day.
Can anyone relate to the other side of me.

And we die.
Unknowingly.
Waiting for the real us to break free.
Can anyone relate to the OTHER. SIDE. of ME ?


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A song I wrote in about 15 minutes. Just writing biggrin.gif Tell me what you think- Later ph34r.gif

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post Apr 29 2008, 12:07 AM
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Nice one ESJ- many of us can relate i'm sure smile.gif
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post Apr 29 2008, 12:10 AM
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QUOTE (DeepRoots @ Apr 28 2008, 03:07 PM) *
Nice one ESJ- many of us can relate i'm sure smile.gif

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post Apr 29 2008, 12:24 AM
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Very well done, and very poetic. smile.gif

Writing a song like this is a good step to help yourself deal with problems wink.gif
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post Apr 29 2008, 12:28 AM
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QUOTE (The Uncreator @ Apr 28 2008, 03:24 PM) *
Very well done, and very poetic. smile.gif

Writing a song like this is a good step to help yourself deal with problems wink.gif



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