Reply to this topicStart new topic
> Reflection
Eat-Sleep-andJam
post Apr 29 2008, 12:51 PM
Post #1


GMC:er
*

Group: Members
Posts: 2.412
Joined: 23-February 07
From: New york
Member No.: 1.243



You stare at me.
I stare right on back at you.
Truth is, you know what im thinking.
Ive come to terms with what im thinking.
What am I thinking?
Whatever your thinking, is that what I'm thinking?
Right?
Right.



Chorus: Your just a clone of whats really me.
Staring back blankly for all to see.
Grasping my actions and swallowing my words.
Your nothing more then a mocking bird.
Judging my life by demanding perfection.
Unknown to me, your only my reflecton.

I hide my guilt.
Maybe you wont find it ?
If this is only a mirror,
I'd like to hide behind it.


We are both solids,
I'd preffer to be a liquid.
Maybe then this glassy
fixation will leave me alone.

Chorus: Your just a clone of whats really me.
Staring back blankly for all to see.
Grasping my actions and swallowing my words.
Your nothing more then a mocking bird.
Judging my life by demanding perfection.
Unknown to me, your only my reflecton.


I turn on a light ,
To get a better view,
Of whats really me,
Or whats really you.



I brush these teeth,
Comb this hair.
As you imitate what's
Gracefully been done.



Chorus: Your just a clone of whats really me.
Staring back blankly for all to see.
Grasping my actions and swallowing my words.
Your nothing more then a mocking bird.
Judging my life by demanding perfection.
Unknown to me, your only my reflecton.

The time has come
To part ways with you.
To part ways with me.
Tommorow he waits.
For what only I can see.


My Reflection.
___________________________________________© John Minoia 2008

This post has been edited by Eat-Sleep-andJam: Jun 10 2008, 06:21 PM


--------------------
Join Me On the Lyrics Board !


"Find something worth dying for...



...And live for it"
-The Uncreator
Go to the top of the page
 
+Quote Post
The Uncreator
post Apr 29 2008, 03:17 PM
Post #2


Fire Up The Blades, Moderator
Group Icon

Group: GMC Senior
Posts: 8.933
Joined: 6-March 07
From: St. Petersburg, Florida
Member No.: 1.304



Very good, I think i like these are the best youve done so far, The last two lines of the chorus are great smile.gif
Go to the top of the page
 
+Quote Post
Nemanja Filipovi...
post Apr 29 2008, 04:07 PM
Post #3


Singing Instructor
Group Icon

Group: GMC Instructor
Posts: 3.391
Joined: 23-January 08
Member No.: 3.960



really like the chorus man,and the whole text of course.


--------------------
Check out my video lessons and instructor board!

Participate im my new Crazy Blues Collaboration
Go to the top of the page
 
+Quote Post
DeepRoots
post Apr 29 2008, 04:24 PM
Post #4


Get to da Chopper!
Group Icon

Group: GMC Senior
Posts: 2.700
Joined: 18-March 07
From: South Wales, UK
Member No.: 1.374



Wow you're a lyrical machine laugh.gif Another great one here smile.gif
Go to the top of the page
 
+Quote Post
Hisham Al-Sanea
post Apr 29 2008, 08:23 PM
Post #5


Instructor
*

Group: Passive
Posts: 4.085
Joined: 19-October 07
From: middle east / lebanon
Member No.: 3.084



i can say : write-Eat-sleep-andjam.nice lyrics dude


--------------------
Go to the top of the page
 
+Quote Post
Eat-Sleep-andJam
post Apr 29 2008, 08:40 PM
Post #6


GMC:er
*

Group: Members
Posts: 2.412
Joined: 23-February 07
From: New york
Member No.: 1.243



Thanks guys smile.gif


--------------------
Join Me On the Lyrics Board !


"Find something worth dying for...



...And live for it"
-The Uncreator
Go to the top of the page
 
+Quote Post

Fast ReplyReply to this topicStart new topic
1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members:

 


RSS Lo-Fi Version Time is now: 16th January 2017 - 08:26 PM