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post Apr 29 2008, 11:21 PM
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Intro:

Theres a women in the forest.
Her skin, thick like the woodland glen that surronds her.
Hours pass as she admires her forest,
Her beautiful forest.
She swings from tree, to tree.
Admiring this forest.
This beautiful forest.
This remarkably beautiful forest.

Stop.

A sound in the distance.

Who would disrupt this forest?
This beautiful forest.
This remarkably beautiful forest ?

Smoke drifts in the wicked winds of the forest- blanketing the women of the trees.

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At the Core

Destruction.
Oh the Destruction.
Cutting down to the core of me.

Murder.
Oh how they murder,
All thats brilliant for weak worlds.

This Pain.
Cutting me down, to the ground.


Chorus: Your cutting down to the core of me.
Taking what you need for yourself.
Your breaking down
All of worked for
Grown for
Your tearing away whats left of me
Soon there will be....
Nothing more....... AT THE CORE.


Take. What you need.
For blood is not your own,
Making it acceptable.
Feed. On what you need.
This flesh is ever so delicious.
And I strongly suggest you to have a bite.


Chorus
: Your cutting down to the core of me.
Taking what you need for yourself.
Your breaking down
All of worked for
Grown for
Your tearing away whats left of me
Soon there will be....
Nothing more....... AT THE CORE.

You drag the bodies, staining the floors of this wooded glen.
But its alright, its alright. There's plenty more victims.


Chorus: Your cutting down to the core of me.
Taking what you need for yourself.
Your breaking down
All of worked for
Grown for
Your tearing away whats left of me
Soon there will be....
Nothing more....... AT THE CORE.



An army of men marched on. With weapons
screaming loudly among the trees.
Their purpose, simple.
Their plan, simple.
Their motive however, was unclear.

And so it began. The destruction of the forest.


Solo 1
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post Apr 29 2008, 11:34 PM
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great lyrics +1 to the eat-sleep-andjam
i like it


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post Apr 30 2008, 12:33 AM
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Cool stuff, Another good job, The only thing i would change is try adding some more verses to further describe the setting and story.
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post Apr 30 2008, 12:36 AM
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QUOTE (The Uncreator @ Apr 29 2008, 03:33 PM) *
Cool stuff, Another good job, The only thing i would change is try adding some more verses to further describe the setting and story.



Yeah I had to finish it quickly before Dinner, Ill edit it tonight or tommorow biggrin.gif

Edit 1- Fixed the last verse.

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