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post May 2 2008, 03:28 AM
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The Daughter Of The Universe

Chapter 4: The Fulmination
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Thrusters release, as we land upon the scorched arena
Scopes up and helmets down, Ready to engage in battle
Bullets fly and bodies fall, My aim is true, My heart is still
Flank our former allies, Show them what it is to be defeated

Through my crosshairs I sight your chest,
With a pull of the trigger I take your life, lay you to rest
Bombs go off, Debris is in the air, Everywhere
One more rifle burst, And your innards are in the air

Chorus
False words, From political debate
Spark this battle, Start this war
True words, From a knowing man
Fall on the ears of the deaf
This Fulmination shall now ensue
Death Of A Planet, Conclusion unknown

The whole planet burns, And I run amidst the fires
Dodge another sniper shot, And knife another enemy
The blade runs deep, And before it is ripped violently
Pistol shot to the skull, Leave another body

My team is true, And we are strong
Victory in this battle, But the wars yet to begun
In this ruined city, Nothing is left alive
Save that of a woman who’s left insanity
Skin, Oh so cold and blue
The single survivor of a planet by war consumed

Chorus
False words, From political debate
Spark this battle, Start this war
True words, From a knowing man
Fall on the ears of the deaf
This Fulmination shall now ensue
Death Of A Planet, Conclusion unknown




© Brett Windnagle, 2008
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Ok so im going back, and attempting to write in order. This one takes place shortly after the war has started, Where our cast of characters are forced to hide from a pursuing fleet of ships on a burning planet. But when they arrive, they are meant by resistance. This is a nice short tune, meant to be fast and heavy, just about battles. But at the end of this battle, they discover the survivor, the ONLY survivor of this planet engulfed in flames from the war that is now going on. And they take her in, to care for her.
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post May 2 2008, 08:57 AM
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nice. how many chapter it has this story


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post May 2 2008, 11:15 AM
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post May 2 2008, 12:23 PM
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Great lyrics The Uncreator,or should I say Brett,or maybe "number one" unsure.gif biggrin.gif (stupid avatar joke smile.gif )


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post May 2 2008, 03:03 PM
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QUOTE (Nemanja Filipovic @ May 2 2008, 03:23 AM) *
or maybe "number one" unsure.gif biggrin.gif (stupid avatar joke smile.gif )


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post May 2 2008, 10:17 PM
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wow thats nice


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