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post May 2 2008, 11:42 PM
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Intro Solo

People come in to my life.
And seem leave so very quick.
It puzzles me how they could have been touched by

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Beautiful memories,
Now sufficated by my tears.
And im still stuck here.
For years upon years.



And when your loved one passes.
Our bodies are never there!
The pain becomes quite a trip.


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And when you finally meet Death
What would you say to him ?

"Oh im sorry this is un-expected, Care for some gin ? "

And so you drink one last drink, with Death drinking by your side.

"Well man, I guess I had a good ride."


And when Death finally takes you,
In hells waters for a dip.

You know what it feels like to be touched by.


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post May 3 2008, 07:15 PM
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The concept is very cool, Seems like that is incomplete though. I would say add some more verses, and create a bit more structure for it, A chorus or some kind of refrain seems to be missing here.
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post May 3 2008, 07:39 PM
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QUOTE (The Uncreator @ May 3 2008, 10:15 AM) *
The concept is very cool, Seems like that is incomplete though. I would say add some more verses, and create a bit more structure for it, A chorus or some kind of refrain seems to be missing here.



Yeah some of mine are like that. But some of these I dont even know if they have the potiental to be songs, almost like poems.

But I feel like if I think of the topic , and I dont write it dont quick.
I' ll forget it. But thanks Ill edit it sometime smile.gif


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post May 3 2008, 07:42 PM
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QUOTE (Eat-Sleep-andJam @ May 3 2008, 06:39 PM) *
Yeah some of mine are like that. But some of these I dont even know if they have the potiental to be songs, almost like poems.

But I feel like if I think of the topic , and I dont write it dont quick.
I' ll forget it. But thanks Ill edit it sometime smile.gif


Why don't you wite your ideas down in word, and post them here once they are complete? smile.gif


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post May 3 2008, 07:47 PM
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QUOTE (Stevie·Ray·Vaughn @ May 3 2008, 10:42 AM) *
Why don't you wite your ideas down in word, and post them here once they are complete? smile.gif



I will smile.gif

Never really thought of that .

Will do !

Stay tuned for the next COMPLETED project laugh.gif


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post May 3 2008, 08:14 PM
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great lyrics man.


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post May 3 2008, 09:09 PM
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cool and nice lyrics mate


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post May 3 2008, 10:09 PM
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