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Adel Alsayed
post May 8 2008, 09:26 PM
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hi guys,

i just wanted to share this with you
its little bit short, but who cares laugh.gif

feedback and comments appreciated biggrin.gif

cheers !!

EDIT: Check out the edited "riffing" file, changed the drums a little bit

Attached File  riffing.mp3 ( 759.31K ) Number of downloads: 495


Attached File  riffing_edited.mp3 ( 892.27K ) Number of downloads: 437


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post May 12 2008, 08:08 PM
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This is very good in my ears smile.gif keep up the good work


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post May 12 2008, 09:59 PM
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nice and good work Adel.


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post May 12 2008, 11:27 PM
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nice... where did you get that drum track?


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Adel Alsayed
post May 13 2008, 01:54 PM
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wow, thanks guys biggrin.gif

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nice... where did you get that drum track?


i used EZdrummer, Drumkit from Hell

I adjusted the bassdrum, the snare and the toms with compressor and equalizer by using "BT Analog Trackbox"
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post May 13 2008, 02:14 PM
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Nice smile.gif

And really great sound you got out of DFH smile.gif
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post May 14 2008, 10:42 PM
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Nice riff! biggrin.gif However I think all that double bass on the drums gets in the way of your guitar playing. Right now it kind of sounds like the double bass kick of doom and everything else gets a back seat. Try to make a groove on the drums that supports your playing instead. Try laying the kick in the same rhythm as your riff for example, I think that would sound alot better. Also change up the drums abit when you switch riffs, right now it sounds like it's basically one bar of drums used for a couple of different riffs.


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post May 15 2008, 10:42 AM
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Brutal riffing you got there mate! smile.gif

Just a quick mix tip:
Lower the volume on the kicks a bit and maybe raise the guitars a db or two, the kicks are now little bit "overshadowing" the guitars and cymbals, so that could make the mix sound more "balanced" smile.gif

But overall very nice work! smile.gif


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post May 15 2008, 11:03 AM
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You coud do a Metal-Lesson out of this smile.gif Sounds like someting to play when you are angry


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post May 15 2008, 03:11 PM
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hey thanks for those comments !! smile.gif

I didnt really spend much time in this, I added drums and actually the double bass was just for fun but it turned out cool I think, I will change it because yeah it is a little bit in the foreground as a few mentioned ohmy.gif

cheers ! biggrin.gif
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post May 15 2008, 04:17 PM
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It's cool. Very heavy biggrin.gif
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post May 15 2008, 07:17 PM
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The "edited" version has a very nice groove to it, and it's more dynamic this time!

Great job! smile.gif


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post May 15 2008, 08:06 PM
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Yes much better! biggrin.gif Rocking tune, now go make a whole song out of it tongue.gif


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post May 15 2008, 08:15 PM
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very nice riffs. now try playing it with your guitar tuned to B! biggrin.gif \m/

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