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> This Young Boy's Heart, by me :)
post May 11 2008, 11:48 AM
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After uploading some lyrics last time, thought I would put some more up....will upload another 2 songs today smile.gif Enjoy, and Be Gentle!

This young boy's heart,
Has been broken before,
Its left him a shadow,
drunk and broken on the floor,
His whole existence,
amounted to hurt and pain,
Is there a chance this young boy,
Will ever love again?

We all have to live,
With what we gain or lose,
He's lost more than most,
It wasnt something he had to choose,
Is he paying for past sin's
or accounting for mistakes,
Who is responsible,
Each time his heart breaks,

This young boy's heart,
It don't love no more,
It's been scolded one too many times before,
He dream's of a life,
Without heartache and pain,
But he's learnt from his mistakes,
And won't make them again,

He whisper's in his sleep,
And talks of his strife,
Of how its consuming him,
And ruining his life,
Is it his luck, or has it been written,
That he must get hurt,
Whenever he gets smitten,
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post May 11 2008, 01:33 PM
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Just like before, these are very good, The flow seems very natural and has so many melody possibilities.
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post May 11 2008, 01:40 PM
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Awesome. Just sang along to those lyrics, very easy to make a nice melody from it and a nice flowing rhythm.

Great job!
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post May 11 2008, 10:01 PM
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good lyrics

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post May 11 2008, 10:51 PM
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great stuff man.

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post May 11 2008, 10:57 PM
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Nice - I can feel a pop country acoustic ballad vibe with these lyrics smile.gif

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