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The Uncreator
post May 15 2008, 11:29 PM
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Here is a song of mine, titled "In The Sea Of Sand". Its mostly done, got the intro and the first verse and such done, Got all of it planned out, but I just broke my A String, So I cant record the rest yet for a few more hours, Just wanted to see what you guys though of it smile.gif

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I Also wrote lyrics for this, The link is in my sig if you wanna see them smile.gif

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Whoops, Just realized i recorded all the rhythm guitars in my lead tone.....I uh.....Meant do that..... blink.gif
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post May 15 2008, 11:39 PM
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It sounds great ! biggrin.gif
I pictured a man trapped in the desert when I listened to this. Maybe hes suicidal ? That would explain the crushing distortion laugh.gif

The lead reminds me of Marty Friedman.

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Edit: OMG I WAS DEAD ON biggrin.gif I didnt even read the lyrics till after I posted that ha ha ha ha.
Shows how good this really is . smile.gif

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post May 15 2008, 11:40 PM
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Ah, I'm glad you liked it, And what you pictured was great too, Pretty much what the song is about smile.gif
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post May 16 2008, 09:21 AM
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nice track uncreator also it has a melodic composing. i like it


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post May 16 2008, 03:27 PM
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I must say that I absolutely love the intro riff! biggrin.gif I'm a sucker for anything phrygian/phrygian dominant and you nailed a really cool groove with it. I'm not too sure about the rest. It might work great with a band and a singer on top but I think it sounds kind of boring on it's own. Also the song needs a massive chorus to back up your excellent intro.


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