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> Through The Eyes Of The Public, Lyrics for the memory of Kurt Cobain
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post May 15 2008, 11:46 PM
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Verse 1:
Im bleeding inside,
And I dont know why.
All these things within me,
Destroying my mind.

The lifestock
Of my farm,
Is dieing.

I have the cure,
But I hide it in my
Selfishness.

Chorus:
To sweat red tears,
Helps save a life.
Realizing whats wrong,
And relizing whats right.

Pouring red water into the glass,
As you understand the truth at last.


Verse 2:
Publicity is killing me.
My words are mine.
Leave them be !

Structures of my mind,
Overdosed by the Public Eye.


Chorus Revised:
To sweat red tears,
Helps save a life.

Cut whats open,
With this knife.

Ill change it all, with a bullet.
Change it all ,with a bullettt!!!...


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Chorus:
To sweat red tears,
Helps save a life.
Realizing whats wrong,
And relizing whats right.

Pouring red water into the glass,
As you understand the truth at last.


Nothing left of the past.
Memories buried at last.

Ill change it all with a bullet,
Change it all with a bullet.

___________________________©John Minoia 2008

This is for Kurt Cobain. I wanted to write something that I felt Kurt singing to me today in Science. I was day dreaming and imagined Kurt singing to me, call me crazy laugh.gif laugh.gif

Feedback is welcomed ! smile.gif





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post May 15 2008, 11:50 PM
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Good job, Emotions are nice and clear, and it has great structure. And I like the emphasis on the word bullet at the end smile.gif
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post May 15 2008, 11:53 PM
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RIP Kurt. I like the lyrics. I wrote a tribute to Kurt Song long ago but I have never turned it into a song. I love Nirvana and Kurt. smile.gif


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post May 16 2008, 12:03 AM
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Thanks, Glad you guys like it smile.gif


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post May 16 2008, 09:25 AM
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nice lyrics mate.


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post May 16 2008, 12:38 PM
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QUOTE (Hisham Al-Sanea @ May 16 2008, 12:25 AM) *
nice lyrics mate.


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post May 16 2008, 12:46 PM
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nice lyrics, we can maybe make a song of it tongue.gif
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post May 16 2008, 12:54 PM
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QUOTE (Zizi Top @ May 16 2008, 03:46 AM) *
nice lyrics, we can maybe make a song of it tongue.gif
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Yeah Id be down ! smile.gif

But I have no recording gear mad.gif

I wouldnt mind if someone did it.


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post May 16 2008, 01:25 PM
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do you have a mic, can you sing just the rythm of the singing .. just so we can see how it sounds like ...


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post May 16 2008, 06:21 PM
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QUOTE (Zizi Top @ May 16 2008, 04:25 AM) *
do you have a mic, can you sing just the rythm of the singing .. just so we can see how it sounds like ...



hmm ill see what I can do,


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