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post May 16 2008, 12:53 PM
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Verse 1:
Your my excruciating medicine.
As I sit amongst shadows,
Awaiting my sympathy.

And as my patience runs thin,
I count the hours that pass me by.

This imagery is killing me,
If your here.....
Show Yourself !

Chorus: Ive waited for so looooooong
For so long.

This vision cant be wrooooooong.
Cant be wrong.

Verse 2:
You broden my horizions,
Helping me find new light inside.

Your image must be real.
I cant be broken down again today.

Toooday.

Chorus: Ive waited for so looooooong
For so long.

This vision cant be wrooooooong.
Cant be wrong.

Verse 3:

And you slowly start to dissappear,
A symbol of what I feared.
What I feared

Chorus: Ive waited for so looooooong
For so long.

This vision cant be wrooooooong.
Cant be wrong.

Guitar Solo

Chorus: Ive waited for so looooooong
For so long.

This vision cant be wrooooooong.
Cant be wrong.


Outro: Because my survival
echo"My survival"
My Survival
echo"My survival"
My Survival
echo"My survival


Depends on your arrival.

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post May 16 2008, 11:04 PM
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nice lyrics mate


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post May 17 2008, 01:27 AM
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Cool stuff, I felt that chorus was repeated a bit too much, But in the context of the song, that all depends on how its sung and whatnot.

Other than that, It kind of reminded me of Warrel Dane's lyrics (Im a HUGE Warrel Dane fan smile.gif )
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post May 18 2008, 01:32 AM
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Thanks for the feedback smile.gif

@Uncreator: The chorus is repeated alot because of how I was singing it. Almost a Linkin Park feel biggrin.gif

Hope that clears it up a bit cool.gif



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post May 18 2008, 02:12 AM
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Yeah i figured that was it. smile.gif
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